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Story: True Soldier
Posted on Thursday February 10, 2005 at 10:26 by Dejana
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Members Stories Season: Sailor Moon R
Main Characters: Rei/Raye, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, General

Rated: PG
Status: Completed

A serious injury suffered during battle brings Sailor Mars a fresh perspective regarding her princess and their roles as Sailor Senshi.

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Once again, a short piece I wrote for a writing challenge. The challenge was to take three simple sentences that were given and flesh them out into a full action scene. It came out so well, and I liked it so much, that I added an ending and decided to submit it as a story.


Number of Chapters: 1          Total Size: 15k          Word Count: 2,626

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Loki - Friday August 12, 2005 at 02:47
Another awesome insight into the world of Sailor Moon from the sculptress of fantastic fan fiction.

Dejana-chan, you certainly have an amazing knack of writing the thoughts and feelings of Mars as with the other Senshi. You always show us something unique, something special that lingers like the scent of Cherry blossom long after reading your work and you do it so well.

I love how you portrayed Mars and her POV - the touch at the end when Usagi falls asleep at Rei's bedside incapsulated the unspoken love and respect shared by close friends and comrades in arms. Truly amazing.

You know how to capture our imagination so completely-superb work, Lady Dejana-chan *hands you a bunch of fiery red roses and bows* Loki-sama =^_^=
GoddessSerena - Monday July 18, 2005 at 23:17
Rei, I always thought that she had a soft and caring side, but felt like she had to be incontrol and correcting Serena for acting like a child sometimes.

They always fighting like sister..which means they love each other like sister! I love how you make that side come out. It was soo touching to see to know that Rei really dose love Serena, loves how Serena is caring and just puts frinds first! I belive this story really shows how muuch Rei respects Serena!!

I give this Story a 5 star rating!!!

Keep Writing!
Arysta - Thursday February 24, 2005 at 19:22
This was a neat story. A nice peek at what ties the Senshi together, and aspects of the senshi that aren't really explored that deeply in canon. Nicely done!
lalita - Thursday February 17, 2005 at 12:30
Gods dejana, that was beauitful.
Simply beautiful.
lingy - Friday February 11, 2005 at 20:28
You know, whenever I read one of your stories, I always come out with a completely different opinion of the characters.

This was lovely. Your portrayal of Usagi was so touching, and I don't think I have ever seen anyone show Rei's appriciation of her in such a heart-warming way.

It was well written, easy to follow, and quite enthrawling. I really hope you write another soon.

Great Job, as usual!
Lissa - Friday February 11, 2005 at 02:08
Another great story, Dejana! I loved how you captured and portrayed Rei's relationship with Usagi. I've always thought that Usagi and Rei were very close. It's just that Rei hides her true emotions behind a mask of anger and frustration. Good contrast between Rei and Usagi, who always wears her heart on her sleeve. I didn't see any grammatical or technical errors, and although it was a short one-shot, it was a wonderful one! ^-^
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