Insanity, pure insanity. Haha, this story is genius. You have an everyday, average character, a computer, a can of Diet Dr. Pepper, and a soda spill, and voila, you get *this.* I love it.
The setting is great, and I'm looking forward to the future ones--this seriously must be the ultimate crossover ever. Normally, I'm not into crossovers, but this one is fantastic, intriguing, and so hilarious. I don't remember reading anything that funny in a long time. Awesome job.
The characterization is great. From what I've seen, the chracters you have used from TV shows are definitely in character. I especially love your original character (and I'm positive he is based off you, since you two happen to share names--*coff* lol. The combinations of the Senshi and the Rangers was great. Genius, pure genius.
As usual, your spelling ang grammar, all technicalities, are fine. The story is well written and the idea is fantastic. Very original. The only thing I would recommend is in the second chapter, it seemed there was more dialogue than the other words... er, descriptions. Either that, or it seemed like the chapter just moved too fast. But since you said that it was only half written (the chapter), then it's nothing to worry about.
Anyway, incredible job once again, and I await your next installment.
Let the insanity ensue! |
