2010-09-09 15:35 RT @googlebooks: Victorious warriors win first and then go to war, while defeated warriors go to war first and then seek to win....

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Wonderful story! I absolutely loved it!

I love this story. It is wonderful and well written!

You have a real gift for writing. I enjoyed every moment.

Great story, wonderful characters. I loved the way you slowly worked out all the problems so it felt authentic. I especially love the interactions between Serenity and Endymion. So glad I read this! The epilogue is perfect.

whats the first storys nay?

Awwww...it was sooo cute!! I'm glad you made an epilogue. Keep up the excellent writing.
~!*Eternia*!~

Wow what a wonderful way to end a story like this and given that Serenity is a forgiving girl and Anne was willing to repent what she has done and it suited or fitted with how Endymion is in itself. People can choose to be forgiving or wallow in hatred. Nice. Thank you for gracing us with this story!

OMG this story was amazing! It was a true pleasure reasing it, I hope to read more of your stories soon, take care and keep up the good work!

ohh its over now =[
i dont think you could have ended this better though, i really did enjoy this story - it's now in my favourites ^^

Oh wow. It really ended. Thanks for the story. It was so sweet but Anne really got off very lightly. Atleast she repented.

thank you for finishing this story i thought that you did a wonderful job . Im glad that i read it .

That was a good ending. I enjoyed reading this story and your others as well. You know how to make the story amd where to stop them to keep readers wanting more.

Sigh. Wonderful ending. Makes one feel all happy and good. Well done.

Aww. They finally did it. And lets party w/ Diamond gone. Too bad theres a war coming because of him. This story is so beautiful! I look forward to the next chapter.

thats so sweet i almost want to cry. Great job on this whole story, i was never disappointed.

Is that it? what happens? Does she finally get over her fears. What happens next? Is there another story that continues this one?

very well done, your writing is impressive! Keep up the good work.

Sniffle. Wow the story is going to end? This was really great struggle between two Alpha males to dominant over the female. But righeousness won in the end. Cool.

oh snap, how awsome.. great storie loved it!

Aja so it was him.. I knew it! I can't wait to see what happens next.. I hope to read your other stories as well.. keep up the good work..

PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!

Oh my. IT all makes perfect sense. I can't wait to see how this story closes!

No....you can't just Leave it there...oh the horror. please update soon!!!!
~!*Eternia*!~

please update soon!

OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! Ok so He supposedly had nothing to do wiht it.. what about the link?? I bet he's running to it huh? I'm haing here.. you're awsome but please please please put me out of my missery!!

Oh cliffy!

WISE: Lady anja, a few lil typos, but this was a thriller and also heart-wrenching.

The confrontation and the appearance of Diamond in his moon prison and no Serenity and his cold calculating bitterness towards Endymion, we know he's a snake and up to something, how is he doing it, what slight of hand, manner of magic, Dark, yes and how he gets away with it... Looking forward to your next offering! *hands you a crystal sphere and a moon tiara and bows* L.

I loved the streams of narrative magic you wove in this chapter Lady anja

WISE, a couple of little typos, but otherwise superb writing

Endymion and his connection with Usagi-Serenity, so powerful and well told. I love your characterisation and Motoki and Naru, that was so sweet the way you wrote their interaction. Sterling chapter. *hands you a bunch of moon roses and a crystal pen and bows* L.

Lady anja you keep proving how much of a mistress of mystery you are

WISE, beautifully written and flowed nicely

I loved the darkness, the surreal atmosphere of the Moon Palace, the image of the shimmering Earth, haunting, breathless and the characters, Diamond and even Luna and Artemis, dream-like and mysterious, the ending had the quality of nightmare about it, I know what Diamond is up to! Excellent chapter! *hands you a moon rose and bows* L.

You're killing me here!
Another wonderful chapter, my dear. Please upload soon!

What can I say my breath is caught it needs to be released. Waiting to exhale.

Anja, another fabulous chapter! WISE - a few typos but nothing you can't caught later down the road. Over all, totally brillant chapter. Looking forward to future updates! Hugs!

Noooo! How could you stop there?!?! Please please update soon! This story is so good it hurts!!

brilliant briliant!!

but another cruel cliffhanger, please upload soon!!

Cry. That villian...Prince Diamond made Serentiy think that Eny attacked to break her link with him and now Endy thinks she is dead. Oh this is a tragedy. I hope Ann gets what she deserves for betraying Eny's trust. I wonder though the Generals are not exactly there either too. Hmm, the plot thickens.

This story keeps getting better and better. i love it.

Thats mean. The chapter was awesome as usual.

Has anyone told you lately how extremely cruel you are?

Thanks for the update that led to yet another cliffhanger! (I'm telling my mommie)

gahhh you're so mean!!
finally an update but such a cliffhanger ending!!

im glad some questions were answered though, i LOVE this story

your story is going very good i hope that the prince will find usagi soon. Update soon
your fan

you are utterly cruel, i hope you know that :p

OMG! I read chapter 12 I think Serenity didn't realize that she loves Endy. Chapter 13 is tricky because I think she is being brainwashed through her dream to like Diamond more than Endy. I hope that Golden thread Endy comes for Usagi.

Oh no! I can't wait for another update!

Write more soooooon please please please!
I can hardly bear the wait!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see what happens next. I have some ideas of what I think is going on, but I'm sure you'll blow them away with something better.

Oh no, I can see where this is going! If Diamond and Endymion have really switched completely.. =X Bah, can't wait to read the next chapter :)

I have to say that I wasn't very fond of this chapter. Your style is amazing, but the point of this chapter, and its length...left me lacking even the slightest explanation. If you could- please make the next chapter a little longer.

still- I look forward to the next chapter.

She can't sense the string? Oh no, Endy hurry and get her back fast. You sure know how to keep us guessing. I think though Diamond either brainwashed her or took her back in time to when she was first looking at possible suitors? Oiy!

Well, you definately accomplished the task of putting some suspense into the story. Of course, that's one of the things I've loved about Anja stories - they are not predictable even for us know-it-all readers. I'm looking forward to more as usual!

You are being a little of a mystery girl with this amazing chapter Lady anja! ^_^

WISE, a few minor typos and spelling things, but easily fixed.

The twist was intriguing, I wondered about a couple of scenarios, but I am really keen to see how this plays out and what you have in mind.

Poor Serenity is certainly in a difficult situation. I enjoyed reading this chapter and anticipate the next with enthusiasm. ^_^ Great job! *hands you a Moon Rose and a silver pen and bows* L.

Please get the next chapter out soon!!!! I want to see if Endy finds Serenity!!!!!

i knew something wasn't quite right when i read this chapter because i remembered what happened in the previous chapter. i must say your cliffhanger was rather good, it really did leave me hanging after reading it. oh and i'm really happy that you finally got to update this story. i do hope you will not leave your readers hanging for too long though.

I really like this story. Filled with action and careful steps from Endymion to Serenity, and the last chapter was suspense filled as well. I did find a few mistakes, but I am sure these are no problem to take care of. Love your style! M. ^^

A lot to think on a "who-done it". I like it. I'll keep track of it.

And there is a cliff hanger. The story is progressing well. I like how you've developed Serenity's character and Endy and Serenity's relationship. I look forward to the next installment, keep up the great work.

You can't just Leave it there......i need to know what happens next, please update soon. As always it is a pleasure to read your work.
~!*Eternia*!~

Oh no! You -had- to throw in a wrench, just when things were starting to smooth out! Of course I know that's your job, as the author of the story, lol. Still. *sigh* Now I really, REALLY want to know what's coming. That's the only thing I didn't like about the update; having to wait for the next installment >_<;;

I think you did an awesome job building up anticipation and action in this chapter. Nice twist, too! (I really thought we were done with him O__o;; Didn't see it coming).

Amazing story, I like the turn of events. Please update soon!

Thanks for the update. Omg, Usagi is starting to know Eny more better by his body cues. That was great! Can't wait for another chapter!

i love it, another wonderful chapter. There was a few misspelled words but nothing serious. And im so glad that you are starting to write this one again, i almost thought that you forgot about it. LOL. PLease write more soon.

such a good chapter it was great!!!!please write another soon

I agree that this chapter was worth the wait. Please update soon.

This chappie was worth the wait, Anja. Very well written; details - A+ Editing - A+ You ahve outdone yourself again. And I think that Prince D is a real jerk! I can't wait to see what Endy has in store from him. HUGS!

OMG...my computer crashed and I missssed this wahhh! Ok, I am over my tantrum. Still an inspiring, awesome story. I am thirsty for more chapters! It was great that Sere wasn't too afraid to be with Endy through the storm so I really like it because for Sere she still has a lot to learn about Earth. Maybe she can travel with Endy to help the poor and remember not everybody liked him being married to someone who was not an earthling. Yep, things could get very interesting indeed.^-^

OMG U HAVE TO UPDATE SERIOUSLY I LOVE THIS STORY !!!! and alls fair in love and war you have ot update you im a huge reader of ur works

Yay, another two great chapters; more more, please!!!!! It's really good!!! :)

Awwww. This is so sweet!!! She confessed her love! Awww. Its definitely a slow process that Endymion has to go through w/ Serenity. Even as a reader i'm feeling the slowness and the careful aproaches of each chapter. Excellent chapter and I hope to read more!

I'm so glad that you update this so regularly. I really enjoy this story and your ideas - so simple and yet so nice to read. All the WISE criteria is there; so no reason to critique this really. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Another fantastic chapter! I'm glad to see that Usagi is starting to trust Endy more each day. Keep up the excellent work.

ah! what a cliffhanger. now i'm anxious to see if she has a panic attack again.
While the boyphobia is getting a bit old- I understand that it's necessary for your plot. The chapter was a bit short for my taste, but we don't get everything we want.
Congrats on another well-written chapter.

I love it ur so good

i can not wait to read more of your story. keep up the good work.

That was a GREAT chapter! I can't wait for the other chapters to flow from your fingertips. Thank you!

KEEP GOING! Im loving this.

Anja, you just keep improving. I love this plot. I felt like Endymion and yet, I could also feel Serenity's emotions too. You are truly gifted. I eagerly await your next update! Hugs! :)

Im loving this story more and more. Your doing a wonderful job. keep up the good work and please hurry with the next chapter.

Please let there be dancing! ^-^

Wow Anja! Another great chapter! You really rock! I'm glad you decided to come to AI!

Hugs! :)

Absolutely wonderful!! Please update again soon!!

as always another great chapter. the way you describe serenity and endymion is great, they just come alive. keep up the good work.
kawaiineko

I love this Chapter! It really made sense to have Endy think through as to how to win his fair maiden's heart. I like how you described the chess game and what it made him realize to do so that he can succeed. Makes me want to play some chess with my hubby again ^-^. As I've said it before I will keep track of the story no matter what. I feel that you are a generous and a thorough writer and the fact that you gave clarity to what Serenity charater is going through not just say the usual "she is scared". You really did justice with both Endy and Sere thanks!

This is awsome. Anne and Allen will be a pain won't they, now that they know this secret. Gossips will run wild and who knows what will happen. I deffinitely like the flow of this story. I hope to read more.

I absolutely love your story. It's so different from everything else out there, and that makes it really intriguing. Your characterization is amazing, and I love how you make the situations seems so real. I only wish your chapters were longer so that I'd have more to enjoy. Keep up the great work!

Hehe I liked the story I can't wait to see the other chapters!

OMG this is one of the best stories ive read you so have to update quickly!!!

ohhhh please dont stop! i love it! very different...!

love it all the same xx

love always D4S

This is a good story. I am patient so I will keep track of it no matter what it takes lol.

i really like the story so far. please keep it up and update often.

I'm absolutely in love with the story line, and love how you capture my attention with your writing. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Your one of my favorite authors!! Keep up the awesome work!

Going well. You definetly come up with a few interesting plots. I hope that between the two stories your updates aren't few and far between. Looking forward to more.

Great story. Keep it up, I can't wait to read more.

Please, please, please keep writing. This is a wonderful story and i cant wait to read more!

Glorious. You did wonderful. I feel bad for Endymion, he's so loving and he cares for her and wants to know more, but she cannot be touched. So sad. When they need a heir...things will get difficult. haha

Keep up the marvelous work!

Well, you did a very good job. 1st person was a good choice and having it done by Endymion. Very good choice. Usually I don't like 1st person period, but since I have read your work before I thought I'd give it a chance. haha Good thing I did. You described the situations very well.

WISE- In a couple areas you forgot a word maybe because I didn't understand a few lines, then I figured out that maybe there should have been a word there and then it made sense. So, no big deal at all, just keep on a look out for it.

Other than that minor detail, you did wonderful. It kept my interest, it wasn't boring, and this is one of the few stories where Serenity has to be married before twenty not eighteen. haha

Keep up the fabulous work!

Love it so far; please update soon!!

Going well so far.This should definetly be an interesting story. Keep up the good work.

Anja . . . another masterpiece! You rock!

i like your story so far, but i wish that it wasnt in dariens perspective. I wish that you were the narrator, so that way you can feel the characters emotions. You can't really feel their emotions.I know you just started the story but i know you will make me happy .