2010-09-09 15:35 RT @googlebooks: Victorious warriors win first and then go to war, while defeated warriors go to war first and then seek to win....

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Well written, keep going please, thanx ^^

Please finish the story... Are you going to add an epilogue or
are you going to have a sequel? I still have a lot of questions to ask you but I don't know how to... I hope you could answer them somehow sometime. Thank you for writing and sharing your story. It was nice but it still isn't finish in a sense. :)

Great story, but is it really complete? There are so many loose ends: who will serenity end up with? how will kasei take it? will endymion tell serenity he is koudanshi? I hope you write an epilogue.

You did a wonderful job drawing all the aspects of this story together so well, it has a real kind of 'classical' Silver Millennium feel to it, I think your characters, especially those you've woven of your own are endearing and I love the whole idea of Silver Millennium super heroes, the precursor o Tux and Moon, clever and truly inspiring.

Looking forward to future efforts and it is always a pleasure to lend you a hand Lady Moon Goddess! *glomps and pink roses*

Oh wow! Another story that takes me back to the glory days! Absolutely Brill! looooooooooovvvvvveeee this so much. Ur writing is classic Sailor Moon, keep it up! ^______^

Awesome! love the romantic tension and all the suspense! Update soon!!!

This is such a good story, lots of suspense and stuff, Endy and Sere, they're so good together, and the end of the chapter, thrilling and mysterious, I am on the edge of my seat and looks like a certain green haired senshi is keeping an eye on things, uber-good!!!

Awesome! And sooooo original, I like your style, more please! ^^^

Oh, I love this plot! Everything flows smoothly even when twists and turns occur in the story. I haven't had much time to read fanfiction lately, let alone review, but I'm so glad you reminded me about your story :) Can't wait until the next chapter, Moon Goddess!

For your first SM story Moon-Goddess, this is excellent work. The plot is great and the detail is wonderful as well. Please continue I will keep you on my tracking record and hope chapter 9 will come out soon too :)
Wonderful job

You've done a great job with this chapter Lady Moon Goddess!

WISE: Great images, dark undercurrents with Beryl, and your characters always leave an indelible mark and why your refreshing style is so appealing, keep up the good work and looking forward to seeing where you go from here. *bows and hands you a rose and waves* =^_^=

plenty of drama and stuff, a good depicting of that Beryl, she is soooo cruel in this chapter, but she will get hers I thnk in the end. Love your story!!!

Its getting really REALLY good!

Well written
I will be waiting for more!!

This story is amazing, I really can't wait until the next update! You really are portraying the characters and describing everything wonderfully so that readers can easily picture it. I love this story, great work!

Wow, the story is unfolding into a rich adventure, Endymion's role in Serenity's life, the truths revealed, secrets imparted from mother to daughter.

Drama as a rebellious princess finds herself in a bind, and Midnight, I really loved how ou wrote that, the landscape, the stars, the planets and the past, there was a lot of texture in the story there.

Images evocative, and that Silver Millennium magic was all there and the sparks between Midnight and the princess, even now you can feel something stirring.

Loved the palace, how you did that was remarkable, the market scen and Beryl, she was bad to the bone! Well done! The story is really beginning to unfold!

*hands you a bunch of moon roses and bows*

Ahhhhhhhhh! I can't wait until sparks begin to fly betweem Endymion and Serenity! Errr..so excited! =] You're doing a wonderful job!

Ot ws really really good-but can we start to see more of serenity and endymion too- lol i miss chapters without the whole dynamic going on

The drama and power of this story unfolds

You portrayed the darkness of the wicked Queen of the Dark Kingdom brilliantly, her behavior classic villain in carnate! The Seven Shadow Warriors, the cruelty of the queen, the appearance of an unexpected hero, it is all here! Great chapter and looking forward to seeing how the tale evolves, fantastic Lady Moon Goddess *hands you a Tux rose and bows and winks*

I did not see that coming, though I think Endy better move quick-smart *waves finger at prince of Earth* good one girl! teheheheh! your fan! ^^

I love how the children are growing up, and the emotional battle looming ahead for Endy and Ka', I loved the scene between Serenity and her mother in her bedroom. I also liked how you got the guys talking to each other right and you know how to set up the drama bits, so I am wondering what Endymion will do, as that little green monster begins to grow inside. ^^ Great job and more please, Moon Goddess.

Poor Diana! I felt for her, I was sad about what heppened, but your story holds nothing back. A great telling and also has great flow, characters well portrayed and I think it is soooo cool!

Wow! I was blown away by this chapter and loved it power and was moved by its tragedy

WISE, ^_^ I feel you are showing us a deeper insight into how the children of the Silver Millennium would react to the perils that are set upon them.

Imagery is fabulous, suspense and intrigue heightened throughout, the movement between Serenity's illness and the dark plans of the Dark Kingdom looming ever closer as events play themselves out. The children are couragous, and cute, but also they show strength and courage when it counts, they are both, real kids and yet, show the quality of thier birthright as powerful beings with a legacy written in the stars. Fabulous and I felt with Luna and Artemis at the end there. Salutations on a classic story unfolding for us all -- a must read! *hands Lady Moon Goddess a cluster of moon roses and a crystal scepter and salutes and bows* L. =^_^= *winks*

Amazing. I am always glad to read new up and coming authors here, and highly recommend people take a look at this as we have a lot of exciting new writers posting and they deserve our support and girl, you have earned it! Congrats on an amazing start! ^^

EEEE! it's AMAZING, truly it is. I love reading stories like this because they totally make my week!! thanks so much for telling me about your story. I can really tell you're a great writer, it all just flows and pops out at you, even at first glance. Keep it up, hun and update soon!

I love Silver Millennium story epics. This is great. Love your characters and you have great dialogue and visually it is really so beautiful, vivid and enchanting. Keep writing.

WISE: You have worked hard and are reeping well deserved rewards and have come a long way.

This chapter was sheer magic to both read and edit. It held the true POV of a child and that is a rare and precious ability for an author to capture, and you pulled it off so well! Kudos Lady Moon Goddess! *hands you a bunch of shimmering white Moon Roses and bows* L. *winks*

That was great. Really well written and put together. And you have lots of great hints of interesting things that are going to happen.... later. Please keep going, its a fabulous start.

<3333 perfection. I absolutely adore this story.

WISE: Your writing is very thorough and detailed, keep up the excellent work!

I have to say, this is a marvelous start. I loved the fact that you gave a bit of background information on Serenity's dad, and his death. Your descriptions were amazing and I honestly can't critizise except to say that it seemed just a tad bit rushed to me. I can't really say why, it just seemed like a lot was happening all at once. Other than that it was amazingly written and I can't wait for another update!

And so the story begins!

WISE: I wanted to congratulate you Lady Moon Goddess on getting your first Sailor Moon story published. I love Silver Millennium epics and this is such a treasure.

I am really happy and privillaged to be working with such a blossoming new talent on AI! Kudos girl! *hands Lady Moon Goddess thousands of freshly cut Moon roses and bows* L.

such a good start...keep it up