2010-09-03 08:19 Loki's Gargoyle Challenge drabble, Biding My Time, is now up! http://ow.ly/2yX0H #aisubs

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Very good! Deep, there was a lot of emotion in that story and you did a great job of portraying it. I could not help but feel what she was feeling as I read it. Great job!

Fantastic writing.

I thought you did an excellent job with that fic. The combination of love and resentment was perfect, keep it up!!
~!*Eternia*!~

This story once again question their past love. I have always wondered if they really love each in the 20th century or it just because of what they had in the past. Feels like they only marry each other because of the past, not the present. Simple story with many open questions.

Nice story but the mood is grim for a wedding. Seems like both of them hated this day. Why marry to each other then? Destiny is not made in stone. This story make their wedding to be a burden instead of a happy day. She had to make a choice and he cancel an engagement. They had separate lives. Why force them to be together?

In some ways this reminds me of the classic Japanese love-tragedy, but it is oh-so subtle,

WISE, It was an almost flawless performance, if there were any blemmishes, I did not find these.

The concept, dark, yet it stirred the emotions and the imagery was stunning and disturbing. To evoke powerful images and get into the head of a character as you have here, this is a good quality in a writer. Superb job. *hands you a blood-red rose and bows* L.

Wow.

It was wonderfully well written and had so much emotion. I could see Usagi standing in front of a mirror looking so sad and bitter. I also enjoyed that reference to the fake LV bag, very witty on your part.

As well, good job with the ambiguous ending. Without being too obvious you reveal to the readers what happened without explicitly saying anything.

I hope to see more! Great work!