2010-09-03 08:19 Loki's Gargoyle Challenge drabble, Biding My Time, is now up! http://ow.ly/2yX0H #aisubs

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Brilliant, I think a major message lies in this gem, succinct, and something to watch out for in matters of the heart, for we want some-one to fit our perfect mold, and if they don't we cast them aside, it is in cases where the pull is so right, and we struggle against it that love is betrayed, and we invariably betray ourselves... this ficlet spells that out with simple and powerful clarity!

Well done again, Lady JP! *pink roses* <3

Oh wow and wow and wow again!!! Loki is right, I love vampires and the romantic and dark themes go sooooo wel together and I love how you have her surrender, awesomeness and very Twilightish!!! More please!!!<333

A most powerful and visceral and potent moment, short and in that shortness is found a droplet of eternity. Dark, sensual, dealy and fatalistically sexy, 14 is brilliant and memorable. Excellent writing Lady JP you're the best! *hands you a twilight rose and bows* <3

Chapter 5 a seasonable motif of pure delight and passion,

the ebbing and flowing tides of nature, the sea of life and death.

As for Nephrite, his beloved journeys with him, I love absolutely everything about this ficlet, powerful, tender, rhythmic and lyrically beautiful and in a small package that just leaves me breathless in awe at its beauty!

Simply awesome! *bows and hands you a crystal bloom* =^_^=

This fourth chapter featuring Anne and Alan is a beautiful paradox, the way you illustrated this question of love and evil and how something new, something defies convention in this snapshot of genius has me spellbound. Fantastic girl! *bows and hands you a Tux rose*

Chapter 3 amazing

WISE, 'something' is one word, Lady JP *winks*

I love the fact you can bring these metaphors so elloquently to the fore in this series, classic SM magic with a clever spin, it takes class, it takes skill and it must have flare and imagination and talent, all these you possess without doubt.

Sailor Moon comes alive when you put your spin on her world, the Manga shimmers with an etheric glow when you give of your writing magic to us, your avid and devoted readers, good job JP-chan! *roses and bows*

Dragon Fires second chapter, a great snapshot of Venus/Minako, her favorite color and the symbolism, so brilliantly penned and you've proven once again JP why you're one of the most exciting writers in the fandom right now! *hands you a red ribbon and a scepter and bows* ^^

I know I reviewed these on FF.net... but they are so good and short and I absolutely love them! The one with the seasons, the one about how she loved the color red, Mamoru being in love... gah! They are just all brilliantly written.

You'll write more, right? Right? *nudge*

Very each different and unique.

I really love these. I love your word choice and the flow of your writing. It's clear that you choose you're writing especially with Rei's.

Chapter 13 sooooo cute, I wish I was Arti! ahaha! *meow*

But seriously, this was so cute and touching, interesting perspective on the SM and also, loved the dialogue.

you need to be careful of words in tesnse like 'came' Vs 'come and 'became' Vs 'become' take a look at the ficlets for these anomalies, but otherwise, class and fabulous writing!

*hands you a plushy Artemis and a white flower*

chapter of spring, seasons of love, renewal and perpetuity, this has it all in such a short and compact moment that when you unpack it, you see something deep, sweet and a delight!

Beautiful Lady JP! *hands you a spring bloom and bows* =^_^=

The triple Goddess that is Tsukino Usagi, perfection incarnate, a great little ficlet and I loved it heaps!

Your images are fantastic Lady JP and the characterisation striking and brought to the fore that amazing love between Usagi and Mamoru as he navigates his way to her heart and finds through the symbolic, the path to the one he loves!

a few little typos, careful of your tenses in stories, not a serious thing, just a little thing to watch out for.

Otherwise, class act! *hugs and roses*

As the seas between worlds bridge the paradox, the dream lights the candle that a prince and a priest of dreams see alone, magic, unknown, a tune only they can share.

A few little typos, but this was a beautifully written piece and enchanted characterisation and a new spin that worked well. *salutations and bows* ^^

hahahaa! Love this one, Those poor little irridescent pink bunnies! LOL =^__^=

I loved this and Kusagi, sounds a freee spirited and lovable child-growing up to be a spirited independent young lady.

I just loved Mamoru's reaction!

Perfection Ginzuishou! *hugs*

I love this, and the fact that the power of love is not even denied a youma, if she holds love within her breast, she personifies then, the Hope in Pandora's Box!

Beautiful Lady JP! *hugs*

dark and powrful, a few little typos easily fixed, but a snapshot of tragedy that got its affect across powerfully!

*bows and hands you a healling wand for Umino to reviee Usagi-chan* ^^ *winks*

With the class and magic of Rei, blending with the style, magic and wonderful talent of your writing, you've brought her to life so beautifully.

I could see Rei, feel her presence, see through her mind, feel as she felt and the atmosphere you evoked, the reaction of her father, brought forth many emotions.

I only had one suggeston aside from a possible sequel, the word near the end, 'secrets' ought to be, 'secret'

But so inconsequential, but in all, a beautiful piece of writing and stellar characterisation! *hands you a crystal-red firebird and a rose and bows*

Each chapter is wonderful. All of them deserve high praise they are really great!

In a word, beautiful

Again, you've painted a picture so perfectly, and shown how a new day and bringing resolution for Ami and her childhood was so uplifting, and though there be sadness, hope won out and I was moved by this lovely little ficlet, well done! *hugs* =^_^= *hands you a plushy Artemis and Luna and a Tux rose and winks*

I love each and every one of these. But you knew that. =P My favorite thing about your writing is that your descriptions are breath taking and you truly bring home the emotions of the character.

I love them all but # 5 is still my favorite. :)

i was completely engrossed from the first line. number 2 is definitely my favourite, beautifully written, short yet stunning. but all 5 are wonderful, i hope there will be more =]