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Story: Dark Secrets
Posted on Monday December 10, 2001 at 11:14 by Aria
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Season: Alternate Universe
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Drama, Romance

Rated: R
Status: Completed

Serena Carson is a driven career girl with a taste for the good life. But when she meets a mysterious man named Darien why does she feel as if she's known him all of her life? And why does he haunt her dreams?

Darien Hollingsworth needed her to help him uncover the mysteries that clouded his past. His secret is a dark one but can he keep it from her?

How do you explain to someone that being a vampire does not necessarily make him a monster?

*Please note: This is a multiple ending story. There are 3 different endings that split off at chapter 11. The version you are reading is displayed on the story. See the Author's Notes for more information.


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Number of Chapters: 17          Total Size: 482k          Word Count: 90,298          Version: 1 | 2 | 3

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mookie46 - Friday July 31, 2009 at 22:46
I'm new to the site and this is the first story I've read and all I can say is great job, what a wonderful story.
meork - Sunday December 07, 2008 at 04:40
Fantastic! Well written! I thorougly enjoyed this story! Especially when you bought back Serena's ex-fiance and father (my mouth hit the floor). I enjoyed all version, especially the first two. I wasn't expecting the twist in version three, brilliant.
skippy - Friday November 28, 2008 at 20:18
OMG!!!! I did not expect that ending (ver. 3) That goes against the whole SM story of Darien and Serena. What about all those lives she spent with Darien? You should have written a sequel or Epilogue about ver. 3. I liked version 2 better because it ends with her actually finding Darien instead of leaving it off with "I will find you".
Skysong - Tuesday March 04, 2008 at 20:03
a small note: in the first chapter serena is introduced as Serena Carter, then a little over halfway in the chapter refers to herself as Dr. Carson, and then i believe it stays Carson for the rest of the story.

if you ever find the free time, it might be nice to quickly go back and fix it for continuity.
anweaver2007 - Monday January 07, 2008 at 02:00
Again another wonderful story...
i like the story alot but the 3rd verson was really good...i liked the twist but i would have never guessd it...im glad someone can put a little twist to things...although i really liked verson 1 also...
great work
x0x0 Alexandria x0x0
fallengirl - Friday October 12, 2007 at 14:11
I loved this story, it is absolutly amazing, you have true talent.
lexie_06 - Friday August 10, 2007 at 05:33
amazing story!!!
lola_bear - Thursday August 09, 2007 at 01:19
great story
princesa_angelbebe - Wednesday August 08, 2007 at 22:27
It was wonderfull! I read all 3 endings and although I loved the first one the most, tall 3 where incredible.
AmusingChild - Friday July 20, 2007 at 19:19
what an original story. I am so glad to have read it... GREAT WORK!
tinkerbell_18 - Monday February 26, 2007 at 15:59
I love the story so far, Of course I'll probably finish reading it by tonight. I love addicting story like this. keep the stories comming.

tink
Mayonaka - Thursday December 28, 2006 at 21:23
Okay, yeah I just finished the 3rd version consecutively with the first and second-I must say it took hours, but was worth my sore eyes. The 3rd version was different from the 2nd and first...Serena and Diamond? I support Diamond all the way, but I certainly like Serena and Darien together. Nonetheless, beautifully written!!
Mayonaka - Thursday December 28, 2006 at 20:50
Alright! I just finished the 2nd version right after the first-still the typos were there but it did not matter the slight darn bit. Serena's death and rebirth was a bit grievious, but really thought out. My best wishes to you and your future stories!
Mayonaka - Thursday December 28, 2006 at 20:01
I have yet to read your 2 and 3 versions, but I am sure they will be as wonderful as the 1st-if not more so!I did notice some mistakes in puncuation and grammar,and those mistakes did not influence the plot,but I reccomend it that you fix them. For instance:

Serena hatred to part with it
YOU MEAN SHE hated TO PART WITH IT

he stepped partway into the room and she knew that if she replied in the negative her would walked right back out the door again.
YOU MEAN he WOULD walk RIGHT BACK OUT AGAIN

I mean how did they manage to account that much of someone past, especially when it was so long?"
YOU MEAN to account that much of SOMEONE'S life, especially when it was so long AGO?"

"What give the masses false information so they're looking the wrong way?
YOU MEAN WHAT gives THE MASSES

"Try these they are incredible."
I THINK YOU SHOULD SEPERATE THAT INTO 2 SEPERATE SENTENCES OR A COMMA.

Serena found herself wondering if her knew how to use them.
YOU MEAN 'WONDERING IF he knew'

He put up his hands. "Fine, fine. Wherever you like"
THERE SHOULD BE A PERIOD BEHIND LIKE

It took him lest than half an hour to get everything on.
YOU MEAN LESS INSTEAD OF LEST

Whether or not he chooses to make used of it is up to him."
YOU MEAN USE INSTEAD OF USED

There are more, but I didn't quite remember them all.Just minor mistakes really-but it'll make your stories even better!Which is something I don't think is possible!
AriynDavynus - Monday November 13, 2006 at 18:57
A great Chapter!!! I loved it. Darien is a vampire and Serena just can't believe it! Looking forward to the next chapter. Sorry this review is so short I didn't have much time. Later
Gabyttita - Sunday November 05, 2006 at 15:58
Wow..!! incredible story..!! what i liked the most is how you mentioned the different times serena and darien met each other... like the places where they met, i found that fascinating.. anyways.. great story..!!
=)
Lavendermc - Wednesday October 25, 2006 at 10:01
Aria's 'Dark Secrets', a tale of mystery, romance, intrigue, suspense and action.
It follows the story of Darien and Serena; Darien, a longtime vampire, waiting on Serena, his true love of generations past, finding her at each of her reincarnations, yearning for a happy ending together.
However, many people want Serena dead and that doesn't make Darien too happy.
With 3 different endings to her story, Aria makes sure to satistfy all kinds of readers.
The plot is extremely well concocted. Every flashback makes sense with what's about to come and somehow fits perfectly with what has already taken place.
The flow is increadible; though there are many pauses in time throughout the story, the reader can't stop. Aria's addictive touch keeps everyone's eyes stuck to the screen. Though there are a few typos here and there, the grammar and sentence structure is pretty much immaculate.
The characters' evolutions work themselves up each sentence of every page. Each character grows in some ways the reader may not even anticipate to happen.
The one thing this reader thought it right to mention is the great build-up of the story. The story continously rises in climax; Serena and Darien can never seem to get a break!
Although vampires may not be every body's thing, this story will have everyone on the edge of their seats, their hearts in their throats. A definite must-read.


P.S. I rarely submit public reviews but I liked the way I wrote this so I thought others might appreciate it too. :)
bunnybabie - Saturday October 21, 2006 at 17:33
Wow. I can see how this story took you 3 years. It was exceptionally amazing. Since I am a big Usagi/Mamoru and Darien/Serena fan. I'll recommend this story to my friends. Versions two and three of this story were good...but version one was my favorite. ;D I can't wait to see how this story actually ends, because the ending slightly confuses me. lol
AriynDavynus - Saturday October 14, 2006 at 20:22
I've got to say that this is an interesting start. I look forward to reading more of it. I wonder who was in Serenas apartment? I'm sure she was seeing memories and that makes me wonder how this story is going to be pieced together. Good job!
uchihalover - Tuesday September 12, 2006 at 12:49
YOUR STORIES IS GOOD BUT IM CONFUSE THE ENDING OF YOUR STORY DARK SECRET
jupiter_2005 - Saturday June 24, 2006 at 00:46
i liked the story i can not wait till u com eout with more great writings like it
Missyface - Sunday January 01, 2006 at 10:56
Very twisted, but brill. Please keep writing.
Taracova - Friday December 16, 2005 at 20:36
I loves this story!
Taracova - Thursday December 08, 2005 at 19:55
I love ykour story it has inspired me to do better and better my writting habits.
Taracova - Friday December 02, 2005 at 14:29
I finished reading it and it is so awsome! Have you ever thought of writing a second Dark Secrets to tell what happens in Serena's next life? What happens between her and Diamond? I'm currently working on a story called Stolen Treasure that has Diamond and Serena as lovers, but you know after reading Dark Secrets many people will ask 'What happens next?' or 'That's it!' . So have you wrote a second one or one similar? If not do you plan to?
cittykat21 - Tuesday November 08, 2005 at 06:30
An interesting ending. I've only read version 1, but can't wait to read the other two as well. Great work as usual.
Silver_Art - Tuesday October 18, 2005 at 06:28
This is a great story, especially version 1, mysterious and romantic. the version 2 not bad too, but since I'm darien/serena fan, I don't really like the version 3.
WildCat - Wednesday October 12, 2005 at 04:53
Dark Secrets is by far your best work ever! I love all three versions, especially version 2, in the future they meet again and Serena get's her memory restored within a short amount of time. I love it!!!!
cosmoscrystal - Saturday August 06, 2005 at 05:07
One word describes your story........EXCELLENT! All endings were fantastic although I'm totally a Serena and Darien couple fan, they were all very well written. You have talent!!!
appleme - Sunday July 31, 2005 at 04:36
EW i did not like version 3.. :S hmm.. i never liked daimond but i juss dun like him so0o yes.. but i loved version 1 and 2.... but version 3 was well done but.... i did not like the pairing but then its okei its ur story and u were awesome!!

-appleme
KittyCrazy - Wednesday June 01, 2005 at 00:55
This is a great story and had a great story line. I have been sitting here for hours and read it straight through. It never ceases to amaze me as to what you can come up with. Congrats on the story!
=^_^= KittyCrazy
bluehawaii06 - Monday April 04, 2005 at 07:41
I really enjoyed the story (i read version 3) Very romantic and sweet, i honestly don't think that it couldn't have been done much better. I look foward to reading versions 1 and 2 :)
Angelgrl185 - Wednesday March 02, 2005 at 03:34
Hmmm, I really love this story, its amazing. Actually, I didn't know there were three endings until today, I think the first ending I got was ending three and it was a while ago and I remember thinking, what?? After all that this is the ending? What about Darien? Now that I know there are two more ends, I can sleep easier!

Ok, So I'll start with Version One:

This one was my favorite because I feel that it explained everything in a way that made the most sense. For example, Rubeus. In Version Two, he just kinda dies, in Version three he was tricked by the beasts, but still just dies, not really playing a role when he has been such a source of mystery through out the whole story. I think Version one did his character, as you portrayed him, the most justice. I like how the only way to kill the beasts was by fire and that once they were killed they were transported back to Atlantis, that was a sweet idea. Very well written, some minor mistakes that were missed by your beta, but that's about it. Very well developed and thought out.

Version Two:

This one I would have to say is my least favorite out of the three. It's kind of cliched with the big end of age battle with the two vampire clans, nothing twisty really in it, but still an enjoyable read. I liked the epilogue though, with her finding him and saying her little line, sure I knew it was going to happen, but it was cute all the same. Since she died, does that mean she is no longer a vampire?

Version Three:

Granted I was a little taken a back when I read this because it was the first ending I got and not what I was expecting to happen AT ALL. I think that is a good element and a plus for it in itself. If this ending had been the only one, I would have been disappointed with the ending of such an amazing story because naturally, most of us want Darien and Serena to be together and that's the direction it seemed to be going. Since it is one out of three, I appreciate the twist a little more. It's nice to see Serena end up with different people, but maybe if it had placed more emphasis on Diamond throughout the story instead of just him kinda questioning her about Darien's motives. I thought it was well writted and enjoyed it.

All in all this story was brilliant, I loved it and I look forward to more of your works.

.:Angelgrl185:.
Tandem - Sunday January 30, 2005 at 05:29
Being a Serena/Darien fan, i definately liked the ending where they were together best. I liked how you used her father and first fiance as the monsters, it added to the bitter feelings towards them. an enjoyable read
becxfok01 - Wednesday January 05, 2005 at 18:49
This story is amazing! I usually don't particularly like vampire-type stories, but I loved it! The way you managed to pull in other places (Egypt and Atlantis) was brilliant, and definately made the story more appealing. Or else the story would be another dry vampire story. I loved the way you conveyed Serena's feeling. The only thing I didn't like was that I feel that you didn't give a description of Serena's appearance. (Maybe I just accidently skipped read her appearnace, sorry if I did!) I am def. a big fan of your fanfictions now!
Lyla - Monday January 03, 2005 at 21:11
My god how i love this storie
and all of you who does not like this you must be kedding me

well i love this and aria is one of the best athour ever.

Lyla
lingy - Monday January 03, 2005 at 19:09
For version 1.
This version is more reminiscent of your usual work. The loose ends that version three failed to resolve wrapped up very nicely. Even though everything fit together, it was in no way predictable. Yet at the same time I almost felt like I should have seen it coming. ^^;;
I can give no criticism to this fantastic story other than a few typos. Overall it was easy to follow and a pleasurable read.
(Hehehe, I've decided to be more WISE with my reviews.)
Also, I think any bad reviews you have received are unfounded. I especially liked your portrayal of Serena throughout as a strong independent woman. And still totally stand by my last review.
I'm off to read version 2, and I will probably review that one too.
Great work Aria, this will definitely be a story I will read again and again.
bakabunny - Sunday January 02, 2005 at 01:04
While I was first incredibly excited to read this story for many reasons such as it is a Serena/Darien romance, the vampires, and it had three different ending for a reader to choose from, I was highly disappointed. I am highly suprised that this is rated higher than a lot of your work. I am simply in love with your writing, but this fic for some reason was not for me. One reason was I was incredibly angry at all the Buffy connections you made and didn't even give some credit. I am an avid Buffy fan and could pinpoint many of the things that your story had that go with different seasons of Buffy. The plot was somewhat sketchy and you did not answer all of the questions I had like you usually do. Like, how is it elderly vampires can acquire these special abilities? Why can Darien and Diamond read Serena's mind? What happened to Raye? You mentioned her being missing, but never went back like you did with Mina and Lita. There were a lot of things you could have went into more detail with, and it kind of disappointed me in the end. I wasn't really fond of any of the endings either, but that can happen. Overall I'd say this was an okay story, but It is not on the top of my list as best.
SinHellfire - Saturday January 01, 2005 at 23:51
ok WHY CAN'T I GET THE OTHER ENDINGS BESIDE #1 !!!!!!!!!!!! its driving me crazy please some one help me if you can get Two or 3 COULD YOU POSSIBLY EMAIL IT TO ME OR SOMETHING AT NARAKUSMISSTRESS@HOTMAIL.COM THANKS
kasumi - Friday December 24, 2004 at 17:56
Okay, okay. I read version 3, so now you can't tell me I got the wrong idea. :o)

I admire that you tried to do something different, and no doubt the Diamond fans are happy that the Serena-Diamond thing is resolved. My only criticism is that the change was too abrupt; nothing led up to that ending. In the earlier chapters, you seemed to favor Darien over Diamond. That's my feeling, anyway. I suppose you could say some things could have clued the readers in on Dimaon's true identity (e.g. the modern apartment resembling the Atlantean style, his showing Serena that all the artifacts she saw could have been contrived), but the hints were too subtle. The truth could have leaned either way. And I still think Darien's reaction to Serena's turning was weird, but I don't know how he should have reacted, either.
Bloody_rose - Sunday December 19, 2004 at 06:23
hey,

i loved your story, it's really wonderful!! you're a terrific writer!

but i can't get the different endings... i only get version 1 each time. and i refreshed my brower and everything, i even logged out and signed in again but i still always get version 1... what do i do to get the other 2 endings?? i really really wanna read them!!

keep up the good work!
putitonme - Sunday December 12, 2004 at 00:47
wow, wat a great ending.. i'm kind of CONFUSED. In away, but after a few hours, i started to get it... lolz MANN.. i think its soo good. GOOD JOB!!
kasumi - Saturday December 11, 2004 at 04:51
Hmm, an interesting twist on things. I really enjoyed this alternate endings set-up. I must say I find Version 1 more intriguing than Version 2, though I like them both because they're happy endings and Darien ends up with Serena. I didn't even bother reading 3 (though I kind of skimmed some parts of it) because I saw that Darien just kind of gave up on her after even all those lives -- centuries and centuries of history and romance -- all because she was "tainted." True, I didn't actually read the whole thing and I probably jumped to some conclusions. But I mean, that instant rejection seems just a little hypocritical to me. And unrealistic. But interesting, nonetheless.

At this point, I'm wondering what your new undertaking is. The original stories? Another Ser/Dar fic? What else has been popular in the Sailor Moon fandom? Whatever you attempt, I'm sure it'll be great. :o)
WildCat - Thursday December 09, 2004 at 15:21
Good try on making Diamond her lover instead of Darien, It's quite refreshing actually. You write the best stories, was this your first time writing a vampire story? I'd say it is the best that you've ever written!


-WildCat-
WildCat - Thursday December 09, 2004 at 14:48
v2 is a little bit shaky but your story still is really good.
WildCat - Thursday December 09, 2004 at 14:43
WOW! v1 has a good twist to it. Keep it up!
jennie - Thursday December 09, 2004 at 02:07
Oh I loved this story. wonderful. Version one is my
favorite though....sigh. Keep writting I love all of your
work.
lingy - Sunday December 05, 2004 at 19:43
For Version 3.
This story was without a doubt one of the best I've ever read. Every description, every interaction, was oozing with sentuality. The story seemed to jump out into your mind vividly, it was great.
And the twists and unexpected turns in the plot? FABULOUS!
I dont know how you do it Aria but this was just genius.
The ending was so unexpected. I was left gaping
*Gapes*
Serafina - Saturday December 04, 2004 at 00:07
I hate when I leave a review that comments on grammatical errors.... and then I fall prey to the little buggers myself.... grr...

still a good story, btw.
Serafina - Saturday December 04, 2004 at 00:00
>sigh<

I think that ending deserves a collective 'aww', don't you think? I loved it. It's long awaited and well worth it. The inexpected comedy made the drama believable, if that makes any sense.

Other than some grammatical buggers (that i have the nitpicky, annoying habit of finding) this story has such strength. The far-fetchedness is always balanced with that of a realistic situation that can humanize that characters. Each of the characters has a quality that will either compliment or offset another and they are consistent. Always a plus. Great plot that kept me interested for the however many months we've all been waiting for the ending. Bravo.

My only question to you now is, where are the other 2 versions? I'm sure you know we're all dying to read them. Although I do enjoy this nice and neat ending.
Kon - Wednesday December 01, 2004 at 20:43
AWE! That was soooo sweet! *huggles aria* I Loved it! You did a VERY nice job on this story; it was planned out nicely, good plot, lots of action, romance, mystery...the word choice was superb and the writing style was educated and classy. XP You make me way jealous! Thank you for your wonderful story! Luvvied it!
bedasse_s - Thursday November 25, 2004 at 01:15
I hadn't read this story for a long time but now I remember why it intrigued me in the first place. Great character development and a strong storyline. Please continue.
mmoongirl13 - Sunday November 21, 2004 at 05:01
Oh please finish it Im gonna die not knowing what happens next!!
Jupiter - Sunday November 14, 2004 at 09:38
When in the hell are you going to finish this story!!! It's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
putitonme - Saturday November 13, 2004 at 06:45
abosuluty terrific!!!!! uh.. i love Vampires stories.. i find them interesting. Anyways... Hey...continue the story, i want to know if Serena is going to end up living her life, as she planned, or does everything ends up like the past?....hmm?????????? =] i'm feeling real anxious here, i really enjoy ur stories, i read like almost all of em =] well i hope you finish alright?, Bye
WildCat - Thursday September 30, 2004 at 14:44
Aria, This has to be your best story yet! I lOVE it. The plot, the many memories that Serena tries to remember, the kidnapping it's all so wonderful. I can't wait until the next chapter and the other until the end. It's romantic yet still creepy in it's own way.
ttk - Wednesday September 08, 2004 at 22:13
love it, love it, love it!!
please update soon.
Anonymous - Saturday August 28, 2004 at 21:03
I really like your story, its interesting and i hope you finish it soon :)
Anonymous - Wednesday August 11, 2004 at 16:18
*luvin it* keep em chappies comin ~_~
TriGemini - Saturday August 07, 2004 at 03:22
Interesting chapter! Sounds as if Darien, and Diamond are on the same side. Although, who is this character Raine?
Loved how she told Diamond “Don't ever say I'm not prepared.” That was good. Looking forward to more.
Until then.
Critika - Monday July 26, 2004 at 19:18
You sure can write! I love the storyline! I hope you're planning on updating this soon though; it worries me that I neer saw this story on the first page and had to find it on your author's page.
Tandem - Wednesday July 14, 2004 at 13:54
I Love this story
cittykat21 - Saturday June 26, 2004 at 15:25
i really wish you would finish this story. its great. so please finish it off.
sweetclay4jc - Friday June 25, 2004 at 06:03
go on!!!!
karian - Tuesday June 22, 2004 at 04:46
hey i was reading this alittle while ago and when are you going to write more i want to see whats going to happen next?
Adamina - Tuesday May 18, 2004 at 21:22
Ah! The suspense is building up! Where is she? Will he find her in time? Will this era just be like the last and both loose forever? And most important (at least to me) will Darien be cured?

Your writing has always been able to wrap me into the story and it's characters. I hope you keep up with this one.
Raye73 - Wednesday April 21, 2004 at 09:46
never like vampires...but reading this story has made me obsessed. I love the way you have created the characters and the story line is BRILLIANT, as usual. keep up the good work and keep writing. Rach!!!
Moonbabe - Friday April 16, 2004 at 19:32
Aria, don't you write any more? I love all of the stories you write. I just wish that you would finish writing this story.
Karrina - Friday April 16, 2004 at 18:54
OH I like it..... I do I do!!!!!!! Wonderful Story
Aria, wonderful story


Holla baq,
Kari
Kamala - Monday March 15, 2004 at 10:51
Can you please finish this story? Or at least add another chapter? I love it so far!! How much more to go?
karian - Sunday March 14, 2004 at 02:30
Hurry up and write more i want to read what happens. I really like it.
TriGemini - Sunday February 29, 2004 at 04:13
WOW! This story getting really good! Especially, if Darien, and Diamond are playing the same side. Definitly can't wait for more.
JerzeeGurl - Tuesday February 17, 2004 at 01:54
Wow. I loved the latest chapter. Things are getting more and more complicated. I can't wait for the next chapter.
selenis - Tuesday February 10, 2004 at 04:13
That was good, the storyline got a little more mysterious with this chapter... like chibiJ I am wondering what exactly those hybrids are.....plz let them not br vamp-wolf crosses, that's too much like underworld... or even if u were heading in that direction, can they not be as weird looking as the one in underworld? =p But I still loved the chapter, and the Diamond plot twist is really good!
ChibiJ - Saturday February 07, 2004 at 01:52
Fire is very pretty. *bows down to aria-sama in awe* another awesome chapter my dear, leaving me ever craving for more and more. So the hybrid, is it wolf/vamp or something else? intriguing...

As always, I can't wait for more. I hope the writing kick that you're on produces another chappie soon! loves ya!
Acid - Thursday February 05, 2004 at 11:39
*lips curl into a smile* my dear, that was simply gorgeous. delicious.
i haven't read something so provoking in a while.
- l.
Unek530 - Thursday February 05, 2004 at 07:47
I absolutely loved this story. I can't wait to read another chapter.. The story line, the twists, the plot.. I absolutely love them!
kasumi - Thursday February 05, 2004 at 04:10
Hmm... Your most recent update was a little confusing. I suppose it was supposed to be a transition.
serenitykiss - Wednesday February 04, 2004 at 04:58
like always, ur stories are amazing....
and i just love dark secrets
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday February 03, 2004 at 17:34
*grins* you just gotta love her XD That ending line was perfect, hehe I started sniggering at the ending. The chapter makes me think of a billion questions in my head, I can't wait to find out!
FallenAngel - Tuesday February 03, 2004 at 04:56
Wow! I've been waiting so long for you to update. This really made my day. The story is wonderful, as always, and I hope to see more from you soon. Can't wait!
SilverRunningWater89 - Tuesday February 03, 2004 at 04:38
what a wonderful ending to the chapter! ahaha. You're such a marvelous writer. This fic was well rounded, it showed in your writing that it was carefully thought out, and I just love your writing style period. Terrific job!
psycho4moon - Monday February 02, 2004 at 21:52
Oh i'm soooo happy that another chapter is out, and of course it was grrrreat as always. Thanks! Can't wait for more ^_-
daisystar - Monday February 02, 2004 at 21:32
finally finally! yay! i love it! at least this chapter explains a few confusions i had. another chapter! and i'm so happy. i just hope i don't have to wait as long as last time for the next chapter to come out. i hope to hear from you soon, i really cannot wait til the next chapter of "dark secrets" is out, hopefully soon. please keep writing and updating!
lacyloss - Monday February 02, 2004 at 16:57
OMG OMG! You finally updated! I thank you so much please oh pleasae update again!!! i just
cant believe you update thank you so so so much this story is great!Update SOON!!!
Anonymous - Monday February 02, 2004 at 14:59
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG. You updated. I. LOVE. YOU. I'll deff. read this after school.
Krissy - Saturday January 03, 2004 at 06:13
if i haven't told u b4, i love your story and i can't wait to read more. But we have 1 BIG PROBLEM...you dont' seem to UPDATE.
so please update, update update...please.
KarenWalker - Friday December 26, 2003 at 22:37
that was really awesome! i hope you update soon!
magdalenna - Monday December 22, 2003 at 00:00
Finish that story or...
he,he ^^ ahm just finish allready
artcat46 - Thursday December 04, 2003 at 20:39
plz plz plz finish! i luv it so far just i want to read more
XxMelaxX - Friday October 24, 2003 at 02:16
Ahhh You must finish this right away!! I am going crazy!! Once again you've created a wonderful, breathtaking, magnificent -and all the other fantastic words out there- story. I love your work and hopefully you'll finish this soon....VERY SOON...!! okee, buh bai!!
Demonic_Angel - Saturday October 18, 2003 at 17:32
hey update already!! good story but I want to know what happens
Anonymous - Sunday August 31, 2003 at 05:17
OMG I cant wait till u update it again its killing me not knowing whats gonna happen next! well anyways great stry.
Chillen in da bronx
Fireeyesinthedark - Wednesday August 20, 2003 at 13:19
I think this story is brilliant so far. Are you planning on writing any more soon? I think this is developing into a very good story, and would love to see more of it as soon as possible.
Dragon_Fire - Saturday August 02, 2003 at 08:12
i just love where the story is going!! u got the brains girl! keep up the good work!!!!
starryice18 - Saturday August 02, 2003 at 03:06
I LOVE stories like this (dark alternate realities w/romance). Please keep writing on it and finish it ASAP!!!
Anonymous - Friday June 06, 2003 at 17:30
Hey, I'm new to this website but I have read some of your completed stories and I am just ...... WOW! Hope you'll be getting the new chapter out! Can't wait :)
nightstarr - Friday June 06, 2003 at 06:59
Great story. I read it all in one go (thus far anyway) keep it up. Only one thing bothered me: if Serena drank Darien's blood in order to remember the past (instead of going to bed together)....and then Darien drank Serena's blood in the second last chapter....

Doesn't that make Serena turned? Or does it have to happen in the reverse order?
TriGemini - Saturday May 24, 2003 at 23:02
Thanks for the Update. I'm really getting into this story.
It's really GREAT! Interesting chapter. You really got the suspense going. Wonder what Diamond is up to? Probably something that is not good. But the situation seems to be bad. Serena feels betrayed and now because of what Diamond told her. She's going to leave. Wonder what will happen next. The suspense is too much.

Please...update soon. Can't wait until the next chapter. Things in this story are getting really GOOD!
Can't wait to see what happens. Until then.
TriGemini - Saturday May 24, 2003 at 23:01
Thanks for the Update. I'm really getting into this story.
It's really GREAT! Interesting chapter. You really got the suspense going. Wonder what Diamond is up to? Probably something that is not good. But the situation seems to be bad. Serena feels betrayed and now because of what Diamond told her. She's going to leave. Wonder what will happen next. The suspense is too much.

Please...update soon. Can't wait until the next chapter. Things in this story are getting really GOOD!
Can't wait to see what happens. Until then.
Leni_BA - Saturday May 24, 2003 at 01:49
Thanks heavens! A new chapter! I had already given up hope on this story *hangs head in shame* I was wrong and VERY few times I've been so glad of being wrong. *grins* Did I say THANK YOU, ARIA. Cuz, really, *thank you* K&S Leni
jinjin - Monday May 19, 2003 at 19:50
hey aria....i just wanted to say that u have a great story going on here...just dont take too long with the update :) oh... and by the way...whatever happened to the rest of the girls that u mentioned in the early chapters? you never mentioned them again after a certain point in ur story...but im just curious...
ANGELBLOOD - Saturday May 17, 2003 at 14:06
That took you a LONG time to get out, I thought you left this story! But, that was good! I lvoe thsi story, and I love the plot line, vampires! Is it true taht Darien gave her false information and memories no, and how could he sleep w/ Rei. I don't like her very much, oh well! So many questions, MORE MORE MORE AND FAST PLEASE?! THANK YOU! =^ . ^=!
miss_indiaca - Saturday May 17, 2003 at 03:22
You are such a talented writer. I'm always hooked when I read your stories. So talented and the story is so engulfing. I can't wait till the next installment!
Sweetcece15 - Saturday May 17, 2003 at 02:06
AHHH! O_O I can't believe you stopped there! You need to continue!!!! Was Diamond messing with her? I don't know if I should be mad at Darien for lieing to her or Diamond messing with her!! Oh poor Serena! Why is the world against her?! Write soon!
mmoongirl13 - Friday May 16, 2003 at 22:15
OMG YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! I'M ABOUT TO DIE IF I DON'T FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! PLEASE HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER.
Sailor_Angel - Friday May 16, 2003 at 10:58
fantastic like the rest of your stories
Angel_Grrl - Thursday May 15, 2003 at 01:28
I'm really enjoying this. *thumbs high* As always, good job and kudos.
Stringhead - Thursday May 15, 2003 at 01:00
As much as I anticipated this chapter, it destroyed a few (three) perfections for the story:
a)Ra'ine turns into a trollop (I liked her)
b)Dal'rien wasn't exactly what one calls completely faithful
c)Alan saw . . . Eww . . .

*sob*
My perfections . . .
Kimmi-Chan - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 22:51
How can Serena think that? Ugh, I don't what will happen but there is no way Darien would lie to her or manipulate her like that *tear*!!!! Oooooooooooo, but I love this story. I read the first chapter last night and stayed up till 2 in the morning and then decided to pick up on the last chapter today. It's so reviting and enthralling. The plot is very mysterious, it leaves me hanging....unsure of what will happen. I like how eveything is finally coming into play....ooooh, I hope you update soon Aria! I need to know what happens next! (Right now I'm not on good terms with Serena and Diamond though...ugh....how should he do that to her? How could she think that? Too many questions, not enough chapters *cries onto hands and knees and re-reads story* Ja ne.

-Kimmi-chan
lunabelle - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 19:45
OMG!!!! I loved it! Another interesting twist to add to all of the confusion. Its amazing how you have woven all of the characters together producing more of a mystery that is going to have us all guessing. That was worth waiting, however, I hope not to wait the same length for the next chapter. Really good job!
Anonymous - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 09:55
Finally, chapter9, great chapter, and a nice way to further the story line. I am looking forward to the details, and how this story will turn out for Darien, Serena, Raine, and Diamond.....now you're gonna tell me I have to wait a year for chapter 10 *pulls out hair on head with tweezers*. Please write more....soon!!!!!!
nifer - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 05:02
I love this story so much! Thank you for updating, try not to take so long next time!
Once again, you have done a beautiful job of writing this chapter.
Keep it coming!
Telford - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 03:54
I'm glad that you finally updated! I hope you won't take to0 long in updating again, but as an author, I understand! I too haven't updated my story for a long time! But back to reviewing you... an amazing story. Of course the cliff hanger was very nice. I'm liking the whole dilema with Darien possibly mind alternatering Serena. Very nice touch! Can't wait to read more... (hopefully soon?)
ClaidiWinter - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 01:45
AHHHHHH! NOOOO! THAT BLOWS! Please don't take as long to get the next one out. Diamond better have been messing with her. GRR! I don't know who to be mad at... AH! I guess i'm just getting a peice of my own medicine back -_-;;

Sorry if i sound ungreatful, and i know you're busy, but girl you just leave us begging for more! At least promise me it won't take a few MORE years to finish it!

Thanx!
~Claidi
Twinklinlilstar - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 00:32
Wow another great chapter. Diamond is so evil. Well hope u update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TeenAngel518 - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 00:00
MORE PLEASE!!! I just love the story too much. I hope the next chapter will come out soon, or I will go crazy! LOL
ChibiJ - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 23:08
*growls* *smiles and dances* *growls* *smiles and dances* *growls*... this could go on for a while. Do you see this? This is what you do to me!! You make me go bi-polar!!

What an ending to the chapter! I hadn't expected that...not that I am often able to expect anything from you. When I finally think I have a handle on where a story is going, I find my self in a 180 spin!

Thanks for another great chapter darling!
ggrlusagi - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 22:59
I love your story soooo much. I only wish there was more. It's getting so interesting. Please don't stop. And please write more. I can't wait. Love your work and keep it up. Bye! :)
Anonymous - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 19:00
OMG!!!! What a great chapter. I can't wait to update again and please don't take long. I don't like waiting long.
Twinklinlilstar - Sunday May 04, 2003 at 15:00
This is one of the best story i have read please update soonnn! *dies*
Sovern_of_Evil - Wednesday April 23, 2003 at 21:38
Oo...A-chan! I read this a few years back, and loved it....now I find it again...and STILL love it! ^___^

Kepp up the Godd work! ^_^
lunabelle - Saturday January 04, 2003 at 02:10
One tiny question; WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING OUT?????? I'm dyin' from suppense here. PLEASE (on knees) hurry up.
iZZi - Wednesday December 25, 2002 at 04:26
Wondefully and masterfully written, as always. I only have one qualm with it. In the beginning you called her "Serena Carter" and later it became "Carson." Other than that, it was just amazing. Also I don't remember a time period being mentioned where they would be able to see the Hanging Gardens of Babylon, but maybe the list was just too long for it all to be there. Hurry up and write! You can't keep us all waiting! ^.~
ANGELBLOOD - Saturday December 21, 2002 at 18:53
WOW!!! LET ME TELL U THAT ......
I----A-B-S-O-L-U-T-E-L-Y----L-O-V-E----T-H-I-S----S-T-O-R-Y!
It is one of the best stories that I have ever read, and I can't wait till the next chappie!!! ^___^ Update Soon!!!

Thanxs!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday December 10, 2002 at 19:53
you write really gud story's but was that the ending or is there more too it ?
if it is the ending then i think u shud make it a bit clearer
TriGemini - Sunday December 08, 2002 at 05:54
Love the story very much. Please write some more.
Can't wait for the rest of the story.
HBbunny - Wednesday December 04, 2002 at 20:01
When will you update this story??? ITS ONE OF THE BEST! i love your work. good luck in the future
OrangeKitsune - Tuesday December 03, 2002 at 03:05
Very well written you have obvious talent
PLSere - Wednesday November 20, 2002 at 00:24
Aria, you are an amazing writer! You have to write more of this soon! PLEASE!
Anonymous - Sunday November 17, 2002 at 21:24
omg! please write some more!!! i can be quiet no longer!!!! i have been waiting for u to write the next chapter but u havent!! please for the love of god !!! write more!!!!
Sovereign_Lily - Thursday November 14, 2002 at 02:41
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HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCH
LLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNGER MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSTTTTTTT IIIIIIIII
WAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTT?!?!?!?!
FireflyAngel - Sunday November 10, 2002 at 16:06
I just joined a little bit ago and I'm so glad I did. I've found some amazing stories and this is one of them. I love vampire stories because they're just so interesting and yours is so great! I hope you continue this and that the next chapter comes out soon. Wonderful job! Please keep it up! ^_^
Sovereign_Lily - Monday November 04, 2002 at 02:11
How many tears must I shed over such a piece of art? How much more must I lament and mourn? When will my grieving and misery end? When, Aria? When?
Lillian - Saturday November 02, 2002 at 17:35
when will you get the next installment out? *sniff*
Anonymous - Saturday November 02, 2002 at 05:56
OH This was really good it was number one on my top three fav list but it is a VERY VERY VERY GREAT story and being the graet big SM fan I'm I LOVED ALL THE STORIES GREATLY and to the people that wrote them you have great talent and keep up the work"_"

1.Girls on Bikes
2.Dark Secrets
3.Once in a Millenium

They will keep you on the edge of your seat but I have an GIGANTIC IMAGNATION and I LOVED THESE STORIES VERYto the six thousanded power!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Thursday October 24, 2002 at 23:56
this is an amazing story! i can't even begin to imagen how long you had to be writing on this!
thaiger - Wednesday October 16, 2002 at 09:23
i love this story. at first i was a little wary of the whole vampire element (i've read some pretty bad ones) but i was more than pleasantly surprised by the wonderful plot and depth of character this story has. this is exceptionally well written. good job!

p.s. can you write some more?






...pretty please?
Sovereign_Lily - Saturday October 12, 2002 at 23:34
*throws French Horn at Aria* Hmm . . . there goes my University fund . . .
How much longer must I endure this torture?!?! HOW MUCH LONGER?!?! I MIGHT GO CRAZY!!!! *people cough* Or crazier . . .
and homocidal *people cough* Or homocidaler . . .
Random person off street: That's not a word. Moron!
*Lily beats person to death in crotch with French Horn*
Another random person off street: It could be you next, Aria! Beware! Write dammit!
Anonymous - Saturday October 12, 2002 at 17:16
i loved the story...
Anonymous - Saturday October 12, 2002 at 05:41
Hey!
What's wrong with you author's stopping in the middle of a good part like that. Did you know you could give a person a heart attack or worse make them go mentally insane. It's not right or fair! I can't take you not finishing it. Ti's a great story, continue the excellent work...............

Or I well be checking myself into the nearest insane asylum.
SilverRunningWater89 - Saturday October 05, 2002 at 02:52
Wheres the rest? *runs around screaming* I want more! I want more! This is so good! I couldn't stop reading (but a girl has gotta eat right?) and then you just stop it in the middle of the story and I'm gonna fall of the cliff! YOU HAVE TO FINISH!
Anonymous - Saturday September 21, 2002 at 19:45
AHHH THIS IS SO SWEET!! Darien is so kawaii and romantic in this one and the idea of him searching for his true love through all those lifetimes is enough to bring tears to our eyes. I hope you finish this soon 'cause you have got us hooked on your story and we can't wait for the next chapter.
Arentimissted & Cupid's Reject & Baby 'Cuz
Sovereign_Lily - Saturday September 21, 2002 at 18:26
*cough* I've been waiting for a chapter for 2 months now. TWO WHOLE MONTHS HAVE YOU NO MERCY?!?!?!
kasumi - Sunday September 15, 2002 at 01:11
That was enchanting. WOW!!!!!!!!!! You MUST update more often, or I will die of anxiety. Do you want me to die?!!!
CrystallineLily - Wednesday September 11, 2002 at 16:39
WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING OUT????? IM DYING HERE!!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday September 03, 2002 at 19:40
it was great.
I hope that you will have a sequal to this soom
MasacoMamoru - Friday August 23, 2002 at 13:09
I can't believe this.....I have to go! NOOOOOO!!! This is such a wonderful story.....written by an extremely talented writer!! Aria....you're the best! I love this story!! But for some reason something always tears me away before I get to reach the last chapter available!-_-; Well....anyways....fabulous story!! It's a MUST!! ^^ My total favorite part in this chapter was when she saw a memory from her past life-or I believe it was! That was sooo cute!! =P Well.....read it....you'll love!! Ja!
Sovereign_Lily - Tuesday August 06, 2002 at 14:20
I am going to cry now. (There isn't a chapter 9.)
Anonymous - Monday August 05, 2002 at 17:13
ooh more soon :)
SaturnStar - Monday August 05, 2002 at 15:12
Ooi... great story... i didnt find any errors in the last chapter so ur aiight... ooo i kant wait to see wa happens... bring out the nexy chapter soon... keep it up!

Hotaru~chan
dragonballz - Monday August 05, 2002 at 12:15
*jumps up and down and claps hands happily*

I _LOVE_ this story! How could anyone NOT?! Write more soon, or when u get the chance! This stories sooo good and it's original, at least I haven't read anything like it!!

Props for a job _WELL_ done!!

=^_^=;
Anonymous - Sunday August 04, 2002 at 20:46
okay, that was worth the wait. you really have a gift for making a picture with words. keep up the great work. i'll be waiting for chapter 9. ~lunabelle~
Anonymous - Sunday August 04, 2002 at 20:09
Wonderful Aria!! It is a magnificant story and I love it. Hope for more soon. My best wishes to you and your family. Keep writing!
Anonymous - Sunday August 04, 2002 at 20:01
wow! another great chapter! Something tells me that Serena's dream is more than just that. please update soon! your stories are awesome!
Lady_Artemis - Sunday August 04, 2002 at 10:56
yay!!!!

fantastic again... ur not by any chance a buffy person r ya??? lol

cant wait for more!
Sailor_Sista - Sunday August 04, 2002 at 10:42
ehhehe, cool chapter Aria.

Umm.. i picked up a few mistakes, girl. Hopefully you should be able to tell what's wrong.

Serena shuddered the think about the fearsome creatures that lurked in her mind

Serena shook her head, clearing away the remnants fear.

"I'm glad you finally come to your senses."

We don't know what will happen if we even do manage to get rid of every last trop of your blood."

Her smiled grew a little sad.
~~
Yup, that's it. Good chapter! Keep it up ^-^

Sista.
dania_knight02 - Sunday August 04, 2002 at 03:58
Love the suspense! ^_^ Great job!!
ChibiJ - Sunday August 04, 2002 at 00:27
Aria! How could you end chapter 8 that way! but, as always, that was well worth the wait! i didn't notice any errors or anything either. well, now i'll just have to wait for 9. Have you notice that we have all gotten so good at waiting?
Anonymous - Thursday July 25, 2002 at 18:07
plaesa finish the story, i would live to know what happen at the ending. It a every nice story.
CrystallineLily - Thursday July 25, 2002 at 01:44
this wuz such a good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i NEED 2 no wht happens next!!!!!!!!!! PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u no....i have a thing 4 stories wth vampirs in them, and this 1 is definitely the best 1 i've read!!!! :)
Anonymous - Wednesday July 24, 2002 at 22:33
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THIS STORY??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? I LOVE IT TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE SEND OUT CHAPTERS SOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Wednesday July 17, 2002 at 20:27
Amazing! You managed to write a great AU fic, I love the way you describe their relationship and all the events.
Anonymous - Sunday July 14, 2002 at 22:58
Great story. Can't wait to read more and more...
Nikitsuki - Friday July 12, 2002 at 18:51
I absolutely love this story! At first i thought it was going to be another one of those boring stories but you have prooved me wrong yet again! I can't wait for chapter 8! Please upload it soon!
nebber - Friday July 12, 2002 at 03:00
I'm not really a fan of vampire stories in the sailormoon realm. But upon reading Dark Secrets i found it not the typical villianous vampires that usually just put me off. Its an interesting story, the structure is well done, with the Juxtapositioning of the memories and the present time. Its another well done story and i can't wait for the next chapter aria, and much congratulations on the book!

Nebber
Anonymous - Thursday July 11, 2002 at 17:37
HEY ARIA!!!!!!!!
This story is absolutely fantastic and I have always enjoyed your work. PLEASE send out the next chapter, the suspense is killing me!
Thanks
Anonymous
jainyln - Thursday July 04, 2002 at 01:08
Wow! This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Anonymous - Wednesday June 26, 2002 at 21:26
really good story. hope to see it uploaded at ffn keep up the good work :)
selenitey - Wednesday June 26, 2002 at 20:04
More More More More. Please write another chapter!!!!!!!1
icesyvey - Tuesday June 25, 2002 at 06:48
This story just keeps getting better and better keep up the good work okies? ^_^ if you dont Pookie willget you~
Lillian - Monday June 24, 2002 at 03:33
That was so sweet!
Anonymous - Saturday June 22, 2002 at 17:43
Aria,
You are just a wonderful writter and I love your stories. I can't wait for more of all of your stories. Keep writing and take care. You are gifted and thank you for sharing it with us.
RosyK
Anonymous - Friday June 21, 2002 at 15:03
that was great keep it up and keep it real and go a lot faster writing these chapters i mean it took a very long time to write this so please hurry with the next chapter
Sailor_Sista - Friday June 21, 2002 at 05:56
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
that's so sweet!
LoL. I am so not one for romance or corny stuff (it wasn't that corny though) but still, aww.
*laughs*
Keep it comin' chicka!

S.
Lady_Artemis - Friday June 21, 2002 at 04:55
GAH!!!! amazing, once more...

write more!!! must have more...

ahahahahahahahaha

im sorry, its just so fantabulous that i insist that u write more!!!

hee hee well good luck with the next wonderful chap. we all know that it'll be wonderful because, well, YOU'RE writing it!

*^~Artemis~^*
Anonymous - Friday June 21, 2002 at 03:01
Dain you're good. You can't just end it like that,though. I want to know so much more. You do know that you are slowly driving me insane. I'm so wrapped up in this story so please try to hurry and get another chapter out. ~lunabelle~
Anonymous - Wednesday June 19, 2002 at 06:39
This is an amazing story. I have to say it intrigues my imagination like no other and I am pleased to say that your extroardinary concepts left my jumbled mind in a frenzy and I am awaiting more of your tempting, succulent, writing to be posted for more tantalizing evaluation. Please do keep up the good work on this spell bounding story for I and many others are falling in love with it.
Anonymous - Thursday June 06, 2002 at 00:24
Oh come on! Please, please please........complete the rest of the sotory! I love it so much, I read it twice over. It's great, keep goin with it! :-)
cj - Wednesday June 05, 2002 at 05:39
u are soooooooo great....pls. finish it plssssssssssssss can't hold on to my seat already
black_kitty_kat - Friday May 31, 2002 at 00:26
very nice! keep up the good work!
fire_enchentress - Saturday May 25, 2002 at 19:52
Hey Aria! Great work can't get enough of it. Please keep goin' Can't wait for the next cahpter to come out!
ShameStar - Wednesday May 22, 2002 at 23:39
*grins* You know how much I love this, Aria-sama! ^_~

I really love the Atlantian/Egyptian past life - I've always found that fascinating. Do Sern'riya and Dal'rien actually mean anything? or are they just variations of Serena and Darien?

Keep up the good work girlie! (And get the epilogue for 'Paradise v.29' out soon! *mock glare*)

~Shame
SailorMooniegurl88 - Wednesday May 22, 2002 at 15:24
LE sob U jsut HAVE TO GET MORE OUT ON THIS STORY OR I WILL GO CRAZY!!!!
WRITE WRITE WRITE NOW NOW NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love,
Serena
Lillian - Monday May 20, 2002 at 01:16
Luvly like always! ;)
Sailor_Sista - Sunday May 19, 2002 at 11:46
*claps softly* very nice aria.
Lady_Crescent_Moon - Saturday May 18, 2002 at 19:59
more more more!! this is a great fic! i am amazed at the endless ideas that you have for your fics, especially this one. Keep up the great work!
Anonymous - Friday May 17, 2002 at 19:11
I really enjoyed reading this chapter, although, I wish it was longer. You've got me so hooked that I'm dying to find out what happens. I hope the next chapter will be out sooner. ~lunabelle~
HippieChick - Thursday May 16, 2002 at 20:13
(Crying) Ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, ugh, THAT'S NOT FAIR!!!!! It was wayyyyy too short!! Now if it was never ending, i think i could deal. But noooo you had to stop didn't you!! Just burst my bubble why don't ya? (Building a bridge) Mannnnnn!!!! I guess i can go read it again. But please please please please please PLEASE get the next chapter out soon!!!!!! PLEASE!!! (Gets ova it) By the way, if i haven't said this enough yet, YOU ARE ONE INCREDIBLE, UNBELIEVABLE, AMAZING, FABULOUS, ASTONISHING, ASTOUNDING, INCREDIBLE, MARVELOUS, WONDERFUL, AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!! Newayz, I'm gonna go see if you've posted yet. Peace!!!!!
Lady_Artemis - Thursday May 16, 2002 at 08:04
gah another cliffhanger, will they EVER end? but keep wrriting, you're so talented *sulks in a corner* he he only j/k! love it, keep it coming!
ChibiJ - Thursday May 16, 2002 at 02:14
yea *claps hands* great chapter aria! now, do i have to wait for chapter 7? can't you just send me a part of your brain so that i know what will happen next?? i'm starting to guess who the original killer was... i wonder if i'm right? hmm, guess i'll just have to wait.
Alita - Tuesday May 07, 2002 at 22:03
A wonderful story. I can't wait till you finish it. Very intriging indeed.
SereanaNicole - Tuesday May 07, 2002 at 19:50
Aria the way you bromg a story to life and grab the interest of your readers is amasing I've many books but YOU are my fav. author I just can't wait to see how this story comes out and I know without question it will be another work of pure genius and I'm not even crazy about vampires but I know this will be awsome!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday May 07, 2002 at 00:44
awesome story. keep it coming.
Serendipity - Monday May 06, 2002 at 22:34
OMG!!! That is such a great story! Your are such a wonderful writer, or should I say author now!?!? Can't wait for the next chapter. Also, good luck on the selling of your book, and may you publish many more! I know I'm going to buy it! hehe ^_^
HippieChick - Monday May 06, 2002 at 02:29
I just read it again, and I LOVE IT!!!! (again) I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT,I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT,I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT,I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE IT, CAN YA TELL!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT SOON!!! PLEASSSSSSE!!!!!!!! Okay, I'm better. You totally rock!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Friday April 26, 2002 at 23:33
Oooooo, cool. This was such a good chapter. I don't want to wait for the next one. Please hurry, your going to kill me with suspense. ~lunabelle~
Lady_Artemis - Thursday April 25, 2002 at 14:08
Wowwy it's really really really incredibly good... no good is too pety a word for it... *grins evilly* Keep writing please please please I'm waaaaaaaaaaay too hooked... I'll be a zombie soon... "must read more, must read more!" mwahahaha anyhoo can't wait for the next chapter!
super_darien - Thursday April 25, 2002 at 11:28
aria dark secrets was a great story a hope you finish's it keep the story going
HippieChick - Wednesday April 24, 2002 at 22:59
I love you!!!!! Thank you sooooooo much for a quick update!!! I love it!!!! I love everything!!!! I would love you alot lot more if you got the next chapter up soon tho!!! PLEASE! I LOVE IT!!! Its absoluty spectacular!!!! But what else should i expect? Spectacular stories from a magnificient author!! Thankz!! Peace!
Usagi - Wednesday April 24, 2002 at 21:53
well i have to say after reading this over and over i love it!!!!!!!!!Atlantis *smiles* i love atlantis stories *loooks at ices* heheh uh huh i do..all i can do is beg that you get another chapter out Aria!!!!
Kero - Wednesday April 24, 2002 at 15:08
I salute you! Your the best there is! I love this story more than anything... Dark Secrets is fantastic,
awsomely well written, and your simply one of kind. I envy your talent! waaaahhhh wish i could
write like you, then i probably the happiest person on earth. Your my number one favorite author,
DARK SECRETS... is i can't describe, what can i say its really...really good, absolutely amazing!!!
Keep it up, and i'll be waiting for the next chapter. If i ever heard there's a contest presently happening
on who has written the greatest fic. I'll personally stalk the host of the contest and tell the person
yours is the best!
Sailor_Sista - Wednesday April 24, 2002 at 08:10
*claps*
That was soo good! I cannot wait for more!
Gaah... more more more!! *gets a slightly evil look in her eye*

It was brilliant Aria!

S-chan
niya429 - Tuesday April 23, 2002 at 23:37
Oh that was so HOT! this is so good. So, that's how they first met, what'll happen next? please! I must know. ^_~
Anonymous - Tuesday April 23, 2002 at 23:36
I can't wait for the next chapter ,I was brought to tears what a great story I love it so much Please please update,or write more chapters you are a really good/no great writer.
ChibiJ - Tuesday April 23, 2002 at 22:36
You know, I'm really starting to love stories with Atlantis in it! That was a great chapter Aria, I can't wait to read more!
Dagger - Tuesday April 23, 2002 at 22:19
OH my god *tears* that was waunderfull I LoVe it WOW!
Serenity_Chibi - Monday April 22, 2002 at 19:29
Please please please please please please please please continue this story! I'm threatening to distort my face so that my eyes become puppy eyes. o_O! I, among others, would love to see the whats and whos and whys and hows and whens and wheres of this story resolved.Dark Secret must not remain a secret to us voyeurs! Continuez, s'il vous plait? ^^
Serenity_Chibi - Monday April 22, 2002 at 19:29
Please please please please please please please please continue this story! I'm threatening to distort my face so that my eyes become puppy eyes. o_O! I, among others, would love to see the whats and whos and whys and hows and whens and wheres of this story resolved.Dark Secret must not remain a secret to us voyeurs! Continuez, s'il vous plait? ^^
Anonymous - Saturday April 20, 2002 at 21:53
Oh, this is such a great story. Vampires are awsesome. I'm dyin' to know what she sees. Great cliffhanger, though.
~Lunabelle~
Jamestown - Saturday April 20, 2002 at 21:27
Okay you are an awesome modern writer...I wouldn't go so far as Goddess, but I will say Aria you have a gift and please don't give it up just because its only seen on the internet. Hey soon you'll have a novel out so even more people will get to know you and this amazing gift of writing you have. I will say this...this story is turning out to be a new wave in your writing that I am hooked on...Don't quit!
HippieChick - Saturday April 20, 2002 at 15:56
You stopped there!!! How could you stop there???? That is like cruel and unusual punishment man!!! But i LOVE it!!!! It is totally awesome!!!! You are one WONDERFUL author!!! Please please please please please get the next chapter out soon!! PLEASE!!! *Insert first review here* Peace gurl!!!
Msbubbless - Saturday April 20, 2002 at 07:02
Oh, i like how you didn't make it seem like darien was a monster, because what he is, is such a sexual creature and very beatiful. I love this new turn and the way you describe what Darien is, (I don't want to give it away to those who havn't read it yet). I can't wait to see how the two got together.
Anonymous - Saturday April 20, 2002 at 03:48
hurry up and update!!! i cant wait to see what happens!!!
GoddesGr14 - Saturday April 20, 2002 at 01:44
OOOhhhh...cliffhanger...this is turning out to be a very intriguing and a very GOOD story! I love it...I'm becoming an avid reader of your stories
Usagi - Saturday April 20, 2002 at 00:06
*usa-chan* i need more..must have my fix..must have fanfiction.......ch.5 muct come soonnn.Thank you for putting this chapter out early though Aria.. arigato nasai snesei-sama ^_~
Usagi - Friday April 19, 2002 at 22:59
okie Aria-sama , this story may very well beat off Chance encounters as my all time fav story..either that are be a close tie.....lets face it i have a thing about french dariens....anyways. I love the way this story (and all your stories) is writtten. Its liek i'm THERE!!!I can feel taste see everything around me......^_^ tahts what makes it all so fun!^_^ just keep doing what your doing. Its very good to hear that you enjoy writing this too!!!! Write it and they will come......heheh usa-chan
lovelyNori - Tuesday April 16, 2002 at 02:52
I totally love your stories ......I can barely wait for the next chapter...I hope you finish it soon....
Jamestown - Friday April 12, 2002 at 22:19
More...More...More! Aria you are way to good to pass up on your gift and I really want to read your novel when it comes out. Thankyou so much for coming to the internet!
Luna - Tuesday April 09, 2002 at 15:35
I just love your stories Aria....I'm already hooked on Dark Sercrets and just can't stop readig this stories over and over again..I can't wait for the next chapter
GoddesGr14 - Monday April 08, 2002 at 23:26
Wow! You're so talented and I love the way you write! An amazing story, and an amazing author! I love your stories, and I hope you continue to write this one!
ChibiJ - Sunday April 07, 2002 at 14:00
Aria-sama, this story is so intriguing. I cannot wait to see the next chapter (although I will patiently wait, as I have no choice). I am greatly enjoying this story and wonder "what will happen next?" I can't wait!!
jin - Sunday April 07, 2002 at 04:05
Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter.
niya429 - Sunday April 07, 2002 at 01:43
WHOA!!!!! That was HOT! I wasn't expecting that. This is so good as all your stories are, please get more out soon. ^_~
HippieChick - Sunday April 07, 2002 at 00:00
Wonderful, Magnificent, Extraordinary, Spectacular, Astonishing, Excellent, Superior, Splendid, Outstanding, Superlative, Fantastic, the list goes on and on and on and on, but i can't think of any more big words. You are one wicked awesome author, who has sum extremely awesome talent! Please get the next chapter out soon. It is so so so.... im outta big words, so *insert first two lines here* Peace chickadee!!

(I rewrote the whole thing, (well actually i copied pasted it,) because i forgot fantastic. Don't you feel special? Well you should! Cause you rock!

~Hippie Chick~
han_chan_imoto - Saturday April 06, 2002 at 22:59
AHH!That POOR little deer!*giggles* oh well....that can`t be all of the story!I`ll go nuts!I love vampires....
Anonymous - Saturday April 06, 2002 at 20:48
Wonderful, Magnificent, Extraordinary, Spectacular, Astonishing, Excellent, Superior, Splendid, Outstanding, Superlative, the list goes on and on and on and on, but i can't think of any more big words. You are one wicked awesome author, who has sum extremely awesome talent! Please get the next chapter out soon. It is so so so.... im outta big words, so *insert first two lines here* Peace chickadee!!

~Hippie Chick~
Lillian - Saturday April 06, 2002 at 11:45
Wonderful as always Aria! I wonder what Serena is going to do next...
Hannah - Saturday April 06, 2002 at 11:05
This story is really great. I love the flashbacks its all tying together really well. Hope you release the next part soon! :)
Msbubbless - Saturday April 06, 2002 at 07:51
Oh! Oh! Oh! I can't believe it, but it's all makig sense. I can't wait to see what happens next! If i were her, i would have run after seeing what happened in the end of ch 3.
Usagi - Saturday April 06, 2002 at 01:58
ARia..i will wape you with one GIANT bunny plushie...if you don't finish this hehe hugz! i adore it so keep it up girl!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Thursday April 04, 2002 at 00:46
Well done Aria, I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope you are a published writer, your work is truly amazing, and very well written. You make the drama come alive in stories. Thanks for being a great writer.
Jamestown - Tuesday April 02, 2002 at 02:50
I have to say Aria when you write you create a world. I want to see, hear, smell, etc., etc. Just keep writing girl!
Jamestown - Tuesday April 02, 2002 at 02:48
This is definately grade A+ reading and I to want to see this story make headway on the site.
Dagger - Monday April 01, 2002 at 18:10
Hey aria I love vampire I so cant wait to read the next ch. Im just so impatient its just a spectacular story maybe you can get this one published? That would be cool! well Bye have a great wait easter is over oppps bye bug huges!!!!
Marsfireprincess - Monday April 01, 2002 at 05:04
VAMPIRE IS AWESOME!!! ^_~
I e-mailed ya! ^-^
Vampire is going to be a HIT!!!! lol!

*huggles, huggles*
ChibiJ - Monday March 25, 2002 at 01:02
Aria, genius once again flows from your brain and onto a computer. I cannot wait to read more of this. My curiousity is peaked! Keep up the great writing!
Anonymous - Sunday March 24, 2002 at 20:33
It's one of the best! Although I am impatient for the next chapter...it's all worth the wait! Please continue writing! ^_^ And I also wish u luck on yer novel =)
Anonymous - Sunday March 24, 2002 at 01:05
This is such a cool story. Very orginal and I'm dying to know what happens next. Keep writing, all of your stories grab my interest.

Lunabelle
Sailor_Sista - Thursday March 21, 2002 at 11:00
You know I love it!
Keep it comin' girly, k??

Thanks for giving me the privilage to read your work, you're a wonderful nad fantastic writer.

Love L.
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