Ghostly Whisper by allyoop
Reviewed by Loki - Friday February 03, 2012 at 18:09
a contemporary tragedy, but there is a light that I like, wonderful work Ally! <333 |
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Im With You by MoonlightUsa
Reviewed by Loki - Friday February 03, 2012 at 18:06
Poor Sere, co-dependent relationships are so terrible, I hope she wakes up to him. Great work! ^_^ |
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The Kingdom by Soleil
Reviewed by Loki - Friday February 03, 2012 at 17:14
seven blades, golden maidens to dark purpose melt into shadow, dark matter crushes the innocence a mockery to spring,
Night claims its prize, beauty defiled,
all is dark, a crescent drips in red flames,
A most frightening end to the 32nd chapter, great work! |
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Chance Encounters by Aria
Reviewed by Sailor_Onyx - Wednesday February 01, 2012 at 01:09
Typical Serena and Mina being late for class then being total ditzes for not realizing what day it is, and I like how you're bringing just about everybody into the fold, i.e. Seiya, Andrew, and Malachite as roommates even though it's only the prologue. I will keep reading. |
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Savéol by JessicaPendragon
Reviewed by PriestessHelene - Sunday January 29, 2012 at 08:17
This was a beautiful story. |
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Im With You by MoonlightUsa
Reviewed by Red_Elephant - Saturday January 28, 2012 at 07:20
I like the direction you seem to be going with this story and appreciate the grounding of reality you've given to Serena, though she seems a bit submissive within her relationship with Seiya... I'm hoping she grows a backbone soon.
This is only a suggestion but I think you need to work a little on Darien. I'm not really sure what it is but his dialogue felt odd to me, like he was saying things in a way that felt forced. I've always found Darien to be a bit reticent and that he doesn't often give more information away than he has to, though I think his minds always going, going, going. My intention isn't to criticise, this is only my opinion and I hope you take it as that and give it some thought. Or not. Whatever.
Best of luck and can't wait for the next chapters. Happy writing. |
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Love Hurts by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by SerenityTsuki - Monday January 16, 2012 at 01:49
Not many people write about stuff like this...People should do it more often. It's a reality for some people sadly. Not all people end up like Neo-Queen Serenity and King Endymion.
It was very good. I liked the start of it and you did very good for your first chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
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Call of the Wolf by allyoop
Reviewed by Loki - Sunday January 15, 2012 at 03:14
What I love about this first chapter is how you've set the stage, wolves are intriguing creatures, many readers like them for differing reasons, as with the magical tales of David Eddings wolves are currently in vogue, in much YA fiction.
Woves are powerful, sexy and a genre that seems to hold its own up there with many other magical creatures, and more-so add to that the romantic, the dramatic, the intriguing and supernatural, and you've a recipe forf 'edge-of-your-seeat' adventure that keeps you coming back for more.
I like how you ended the first installment, great work! |
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Dilemma by LunaHope
Reviewed by Usagi_Carter - Saturday January 14, 2012 at 14:08
Sorry for not reviewing sooner, but I finally had to let you know this is absolutely one of my favorite stories. I love the way Mamoru's trying to be a gentleman, and Usagi's feelings for Chibi-Usa...and of course our favorite couple finally taking that next step...it rocks. Love it! |
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Right Hand Red by Usabelle
Reviewed by Usagi_Carter - Saturday January 14, 2012 at 14:06
I can't count the number of times I've read this one, but I fall in love with it all over again every time I do. Love it! So would like to see a sequel ;) |
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The Kingdom by Soleil
Reviewed by j2 - Saturday January 14, 2012 at 02:48
I want more Darien & Serena interaction.. |
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Usagis Birthday Surprise by allyoop
Reviewed by Loki - Wednesday January 11, 2012 at 16:18
What Sailor Moon is all about, Usa and Mamo snogg-a-rama! Great ficlet! |
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The Kingdom by Soleil
Reviewed by Fushigi_Hime - Wednesday January 11, 2012 at 15:49
I just love this story. Your visuals are wonderful, and the storyline is refreshing. I can't wait to read what's next. Please keep up the great work. |
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Lifted From The Depths by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by allyoop - Wednesday January 11, 2012 at 14:34
Very good! And so emotional. I love the way you described the feeling of possibly losing him. The love scene......Beautiful scene. Mamoru soothing Usagi....fab. |
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The Kingdom by Soleil
Reviewed by serenityslove - Wednesday January 11, 2012 at 13:46
love it.....Princess Mars so realistic...oh Please bring more... |
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A Precious Moment by allyoop
Reviewed by magdalenna - Monday January 09, 2012 at 20:55
Sweet. |
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Just A Kiss Goodnight by Usagi_Carter
Reviewed by serenityslove - Monday January 09, 2012 at 12:59
Wow....absolutely beautiful...Chapter 13 almost had me in tears as i had felt way as I too had to walk that path that Usagi did....:-(.........but as i moved to Chapter 14 my spirits were lifted and danced in the stars...thank you! |
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Just A Kiss Goodnight by Usagi_Carter
Reviewed by heaven85 - Monday January 09, 2012 at 02:10
Great job. I loved it. Totally picture something like that happening. |
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Heartbeat: Drabbles That Make Dreams Come True by Loki
Reviewed by Usagi_Carter - Sunday January 08, 2012 at 00:32
The grumbling tummy and a blush, gotta love it ;) Very sweet, keep up the good work |
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Usagis Birthday Surprise by allyoop
Reviewed by Usagi_Carter - Sunday January 08, 2012 at 00:28
Cute. And what fan of Mamo-chan's wouldn't like to suck face with him ;) |
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One Dark and Perverted Night by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by allyoop - Friday January 06, 2012 at 20:29
OMG! Sweet but so damned funny. LMAO! That made my day! Thanks for sharing! |
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Child of the Snow by Loki
Reviewed by Karimoon - Tuesday January 03, 2012 at 23:19
That was a good dramatic start for a story can't wait to see where it leads. |
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Love Hurts by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by Loki - Saturday December 31, 2011 at 12:30
Fear cripples, answers are often there, but the fear is liked a stranglehold - I am so ashamed of the stats in Australia, thounsands and thousands of women and children are abused by their menfolk every day and sadder? Society, government and the media accept this and do precious little outside cynical tokenism to counter it, the west may very fall on this statistic as division, derision, lack of respect, violence both physical, verbal and psychological is viewed by this army of abusers as their right and entitlement. Will we ever change?
Usagi is a different heroine here, and she reminds all of us, men and women that enough, is enough as we need to take this seriously instead of turning away, that is easy, the harder part about being a hero or heroine, is standing up and saying 'No!'
Keep going, we need more fictions like this one Angel Moon Girl! <3 |
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Finding Love by CresentMoonGoddess
Reviewed by Loki - Saturday December 17, 2011 at 20:30
Nicely done, I can see the layers of tension continue to build and reaching a pivotal point in the story, very good, you have a real gem on your hands here, <3 |
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Finding Love by CresentMoonGoddess
Reviewed by Anonymous - Thursday December 15, 2011 at 00:51
Well I did say that I'd review if the chapter was uploaded :)
I like how you keep interrupting them. Maybe he can follow her to her room? Loads of possibilities in the next chapter (which I hope will be uploaded before Christmas???) |
