Surprise Surprise!
Reviewed by Karimoon - Tuesday August 03, 2010 at 20:13
The story was awesome though it went from Serena and Darien to just...out there at the end lol I did enjoy it you're a very talented writer and I wish I was this talented. I really look forward to reading more of your stories. |
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Counting the Seconds
Reviewed by ladymooncat - Monday August 02, 2010 at 18:56
See, I knew that ending was coming, and yet at the end my mouth was still agape with a soundless 'Nooo!'
Beautifully woven as always Loki-kun, you appear to create such wonders so effortlessly and yet I know you put your entire heart and soul into every sentence :)
Please tell me this is not just a one shot!! And I must say it, poor Usagi-chan :( |
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Surprise Surprise!
Reviewed by arabella - Wednesday July 28, 2010 at 00:40
great chapter it had so much in it as well from the most embarrassing and hilarious thing (condoms for balloons??!! :-)))) only she wold do something like that ) to the getting her hormones in check :-))))
great job |
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Heartbeat: Drabbles That Make Dreams Come True
Reviewed by ladymooncat - Saturday June 19, 2010 at 20:18
Oh Loki-kun, this is gorgeous :)
I love how you entwine your originality of the AU with the wonderful SM universe in your flawless fashion.
Once again you give every character they deserve, the lovely Usagi and the ever enjoyable Minako in particular.
This is a beautiful and heartwarming story and I can't wait to read more, it will be taking proud place in my favourites now :) |
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My Love, My Nemesis
Reviewed by SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday June 09, 2010 at 17:54
IT is writers like you Loki that are awesome and always push the envelope forward. You always take another step in a direction some of us are afraid to go and the way you do your work is Amazing! The details, emotions, your writing style is Outstanding! Please keep this story going I really want to see how this ends! |
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Black Lace and Fresh Flowers
Reviewed by Yumecosmos - Thursday May 20, 2010 at 03:44
Ah! How have I not commented on this yet?
This is a great fast-paced action story. I love your take on Minako. She's perfect for this kind of role. She can be fun, serious, sensual, and deadly all in the same breath.
Some minor con-crit: there are places where I think the narrative gets a little choppy. The images are vivid, but sometimes I get lost. I think reordering some of the information might help. For example, the part that explains Mamoru's role with Silver Circle Research could probably have come a little sooner so that it would give context to the situation, rather than interrupting the action.
The Minako/Artemis banter was funny and provided a nice interlude before the intense action scenes. Your Minako really is a James Bond kind of character! It was a nice touch to have her as Sailor V instead of Venus. The Sailor V side of her identity seems to emphasize her strong, independent characteristics. I can't wait to see what your Kunzite will be like.
I hope you'll continue this some day. It's already gotten really exciting! |
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A Lattice of Pink Roses
Reviewed by AngelMoonGirl - Thursday March 18, 2010 at 05:07
I have to catch my breath after that first chapter! Simply magnificent handling of words; so poetic and characteristic of Usagi & Mamoru ^^ I'm truly enjoying this series of one shots; the carefully crafted love you imbue into every line has me literally swooning! Such wonderful homage to everyone's favorite couple :) |
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Princess Snowflake
Reviewed by Yumecosmos - Saturday February 06, 2010 at 00:06
Haha, that was cute. I love Minako in this story. "Guiness Book of DVDs..." priceless! |
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Princess Snowflake
Reviewed by Nich - Saturday January 23, 2010 at 06:18
Cute! |
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Princess Snowflake
Reviewed by xXJessieXx - Saturday January 16, 2010 at 12:18
Awww, that's just so cute.. <3 |
