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| Website: http://www.meijinhada.org/fallendown/ |
ICQ: 11907901
AIM: Sokudo Ningyou
YIM: Sokudoningyou
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Location: Within my mind. It's safer there.
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Occupation: Retail
Interest: Literary pursuits - the digital pixel, the word - drawing.
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Signature:
"Daringly innovative, psuedo anti neo-post modern deconstructionist, um....stuff."
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I live. I breathe. One day, I'll die.
Or maybe not. I haven't decided yet.
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Reviewed by Red_Elephant - Monday November 09, 2009 at 01:21
Wow, what an epic! I haven't read the manga so I do not know how closely this resembles it but perhaps that doesn't matter. It took me several weeks to read this in its entirety (and you're not even finished yet!) and I really enjoyed it.
There were several points I think you needed to explore more, the most important one being Usagi's pregnancy. Her reaction to it seemed at odds with her personality and you left me wondering how Mamoru would have reacted to this news, not to mention how he felt about Diamond's mauling of his love. For them to have never discussed this seems entirely unrealistic and left me wondering why it was included.
That said, this was perhaps only one chapter set among brilliance. I love your style and truly hope to see more chapters in the future. | | On A Cold Day, She Can See The Future
Reviewed by RebaJean - Saturday October 17, 2009 at 18:07
The ordinary interlude gives way once again to the life for which she was born. An excellent companion piece to "From Afar, She Watches the Rainbow." Either piece can stand alone on its own merits. | | From Afar, She Watches The Rainbow.
Reviewed by RebaJean - Saturday October 17, 2009 at 17:55
Melancholy. Regret. A different, worthwhile life chosen. A touch amusing to see Minako as a pediatrician, remembering her escapades as "Nurse Venus." A far, far better senshi leaving fic than the usual Usagi runs away to America because they are mean to her. | | On A Cold Day, She Can See The Future
Reviewed by Loki - Wednesday October 14, 2009 at 06:39
Brilliant, sheer brialance.
Minako reminds me of a personification of the world today, in terms of fanfic, the love of fandom, the power we all have in that pen, those eyes to read, to bring life and not let something precious die, will we take that pen and raise it high and make a difference?
I just loved this and you are amongst the unsung heroines of Sailor Moon fanfic and I acknowlege that and also, the future is not frozen and a new era will emerge!
Thanks for the reminder! <3 | | Pretty Soldiers
Reviewed by Loki - Tuesday June 09, 2009 at 14:46
The ability to capture the feeling of nightmare, the clashing of worlds, you succeeded in dong this in this chapter. Perfect ending, fabulous characterization, imagery and dialogue and word usage.
Any flaws were small and incidental, and the over-all impact was amazing. I love how you ended the chapter.
BTW, you might find this article invaluable, good to see you back!
http://www.users.qwest.net/~yarnspnr/writing/adverbs/adverbs.htm | | From Afar, She Watches The Rainbow.
Reviewed by bin82501 - Saturday April 12, 2008 at 12:58
This is brilliant. Enough said. | | In The Absence Of Five For The Future
Reviewed by Anonymous - Friday July 06, 2007 at 17:13
love may be torn away
thorns may have their way
but time keeps her secrets
as a new day its blooms return
I like this story tragedy make me sad, making me cry, reasons to hold dear those fleeting Sakura, for the wind may forget them, but our hearts never will only to be | | In The Absence Of Five For The Future
Reviewed by Loki - Monday June 25, 2007 at 02:02
This was definitely a unique ficlet filled with pathos
WISE: Well thought out and I loved your visualisation and the drama... I did however, noticed this: stealing his *breathe* (should be breath) away ... aside from that, it was flawless.
L. | | In The Absence Of Five For The Future
Reviewed by galena_steel - Saturday June 16, 2007 at 08:01
Beautifully written, the emotion comes across strongly through the whole story. The ending is quite haunting. The use of real places and names was an added bonus and strength to the story. An incredible read. | | In The Absence Of Five For The Future
Reviewed by RebaJean - Thursday June 14, 2007 at 23:53
Excellent introspective piece. I don't think I've seen quite this slant in all the 100s (1000s?) of fanfics that I have read. |
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