 | Sleeping Memories
Reviewed by yuna - Tuesday June 08, 2010 at 06:40
Welcome back!! This is a great fic - thanks for sharing! | | Sleeping Memories
Reviewed by daisybell - Saturday June 05, 2010 at 23:07
Adorible! LOVED IT! (: | | Sleeping Memories
Reviewed by Nich - Tuesday May 18, 2010 at 04:30
So sweet! Great work! | | Something Worth Living For
Reviewed by Loki - Monday October 19, 2009 at 13:44
This was a beautiful story and a wonderful interpretation of the manga and Sailor Moon saga! I really loved your treatment so much, one of the best I've read.
Very few flaws, just little proofing things, you need to change the use of 'extend his powers a little longer *then* normal, the word you need here is 'than' you have a few of those, and 'shinning' when you mean, shining' the contraction 'ok' needs to be, 'okay' but as this an early fic, these are little things you could still brush up, but those issues aside, this is a fantastic story.
I loved the battle, Kunzite and Zoisite, the use of the scepter, the dialogue, the timing and the cute ending, out of darkness into the light, you poured something of yourself into the heart-felt story and it shows, and Luna was gorgeous and Arti so cute! Great work and your telling of the Bunny was spot on, and Tux was cool also! | | Measure Of A Man
Reviewed by Nich - Saturday January 10, 2009 at 03:24
Very sweet! I love your portrayal of the characters in this fic! Great job! | | Thank You
Reviewed by Nich - Friday January 09, 2009 at 08:18
Very good! It is nice to have an inside take on how he felt during that time! Great job! | | If You Could Only See
Reviewed by Nich - Friday January 09, 2009 at 08:14
How sweet!!!!!!! | | All Or Nothing
Reviewed by Nich - Friday January 09, 2009 at 04:51
WONDERFUL!!!!!!! | | Comfort
Reviewed by Nich - Friday January 09, 2009 at 04:45
Nicely done! I just love your stories! | | Invisible Man
Reviewed by Nich - Friday January 09, 2009 at 04:39
Wonderful originality! Nice job on reversing the roles! Way to go! Great work! |
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