 | Not a Virgin Anymore
Reviewed by tallshrimp - Friday April 30, 2010 at 03:36
That was adorable and funny! I loved it; I can imagine Usagi being so innocent to believe that. However, I do wonder how a teenager can be so... untouched by media and school talk.
I also read your other story, Forgotten Forever, and I'm truly enjoying what you have here on AI. Thanks for sharing! | | Those Who Hunt, Become
Reviewed by yuna - Saturday April 17, 2010 at 07:25
Lots of potential here! Looking forward to the next chapter. :) | | Hands Fall Together
Reviewed by Satyre - Thursday April 08, 2010 at 15:13
This was one of the best written stories I've read and I wish you would update!! I want to see what happens! | | Rondo Adagio
Reviewed by Loki - Thursday April 08, 2010 at 10:10
This was amazing, superb writing, touching and the visual imagery and the emotional landscape breathtaking, great ficlet! | | Those Who Hunt, Become
Reviewed by Loki - Wednesday March 24, 2010 at 05:17
Dark, clever, pictorial,
nit-picks: in the beginning, the typo 'every' you meant 'ever' I think, 'spit' should be 'spat'
But over-all, the story was brilliant, pregnant with mystery and suspense, and made me think of that film, Daybreakers a bit... looking forward to more! | | Not a Virgin Anymore
Reviewed by ladymooncat - Wednesday March 17, 2010 at 23:58
I read this on FF.net and forgot to review, so I was glad to see it on AI. I have not laughed like this in so long, it was delightful, quirky, and just downright hilarious! I've always loved and admired your stories, and this one was no exception of the talents you possess in writing.
Our typically lovely if not skittish heroine trumps with her naivety once more, and your portrayal of Minako is as flawless as ever. Excellent one-shot. | | Are We Ashes and Wine?
Reviewed by Anonymous - Wednesday March 17, 2010 at 06:25
Good experimental writing, <3 | | Not a Virgin Anymore
Reviewed by Nich - Thursday March 11, 2010 at 22:15
Cute! | | Not a Virgin Anymore
Reviewed by Loki - Sunday March 07, 2010 at 03:39
cute and very funny, trust our Minako! :D But Ami was a scream, our bunny is amazing! | | Not a Virgin Anymore
Reviewed by Red_Elephant - Tuesday March 02, 2010 at 23:35
Ah, the innocence of youth. Parents have to be pretty careful what they tell kids, they can be taken so literally. That was very cute and very funny.
Just one thing. When you wrote that Ami looked 'pekish', did you possibly mean 'peekish?' |
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