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Story: Paradise v2.0
Posted on Saturday October 06, 2001 at 20:33 by Aria |  |
Season: Alternate Universe
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena
Genre: Drama, Romance
Rated: R
Status: Completed
Serena Jacobson thought her life was stable. She had a good job, a nice man was her fiancé. So how could one man turn everything upside down?
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Number of Chapters: 9 Total Size: 197k Word Count: 36,883
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 |  |  |  |  | | Johnetta - Tuesday December 21, 2010 at 03:27 | |
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| | | | Ahh, now I'll have to read the first Paradise story to see the differences. I always do this, read the second part first. Very good story! |
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| | | | | | kbpluto - Monday November 26, 2007 at 03:54 | |
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| | | | Hey! This is an awesome story! I've been reading alot more alternate reality fics and i find them much more fun to read, but i haven't read an excellent & completed one in such a long time! you definitely have talent! i definitely love your works!!! |
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| | | | I really liked this version of paradise that you wrote. I like this one better though compared to the first one. I would like to see another story with the same story line, but I would like to see the wedding!! |
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| | | | i think that was sweet but i think you should add another chapter about the wedding |
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| | | | | | Anja - Saturday June 17, 2006 at 22:27 | |
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| | | | Aria,
This story was very sweet and enjoyable to read. You wove the plot quite nicely, creating a dramatic fairy tale. There were a few typos and some grammar that needs to be fixed up. In chapter 1 for example, you wrote:
"He the folder he had been carrying down and looked..."
Little things like that are littered throughout the story. Overall it was pretty good though. I didn't really feel like I was reading a Serena/Darien story, just because they were a little too OOC for my taste, but the story was enjoyable. Good job. |
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| | | | | | nav - Monday January 02, 2006 at 18:30 | |
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| | | | it was a really nice story please keep writing i would like to read some more of your stories. so far i have read almost every story of your and i love all of them. |
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| | | | | | Missyface - Friday December 23, 2005 at 12:15 | |
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| | | | yay a happy end i love it!!! it's really good.the storyline was good well written. i cry a couple of the parts in the story its really good keep up the good work. it has become one of my favorites on here!!! |
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| | | | omg i luv this fanfic a well done story i like it. u have done a great job keep up the good work. beautiful i love this story it is well written too good job!!! |
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| | | | brill story.. are u goin to do the weddin and the birth of the baby... if so plzzzzzz contact me cos im fallin in love wiv this story.. it great..
beast |
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| | | | | | MMHYUM - Tuesday February 08, 2005 at 18:22 | |
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| | | | Another great fic! I like the twists in this story, esp with Malachite.
I hope to read more of your writing!! |
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| | | | | | Redroses - Thursday December 23, 2004 at 10:53 | |
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| | | | Loved the story. Keep up the great work. |
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| | | | | | Anonymous - Friday October 29, 2004 at 03:55 | |
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| | | | *TEARS* i really do have tears in my eyes, this story is sooooo soo....wow! i don't even have a word to describe it because it was soooo SOOO damn GOOD!!! =] don't stop writinq i love all your stories |
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| | | | | | Anonymous - Friday October 29, 2004 at 03:55 | |
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| | | | *TEARS* i really do have tears in my eyes, this story is sooooo soo....wow! i don't even have a word to describe it because it was soooo SOOO damn GOOD!!! =] don't stop writinq i love all your stories |
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| | | | | | WildCat - Wednesday September 15, 2004 at 16:03 | |
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| | | | I LOVE it. Can't wait for it to be finished! |
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| | | | Wow! That was so nice. Loooooooooved it! |
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| | | | | | lacyloss - Tuesday June 17, 2003 at 12:24 | |
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| | | | This Story was so omgod good i wish that you dont leave it like that i hope that you have at least an epilogue because the story was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| | | | | | cryina - Wednesday June 11, 2003 at 16:44 | |
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| | | | Please get the next part out soon! I love this story. Its too cute.HURRY! |
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| | | | *_* This story is so ADORABLE!!!! ^________^ |
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| | | | fabulous! it was wonderful |
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| | | | | | Anonymous - Sunday May 04, 2003 at 05:03 | |
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| | | | OMG, this is my favourite story. Never stop writing Aria, you have a great gift. My compliments to you |
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| | | | Aria! You've done it again!
Making me fall in love with Darien all over again.....
Great story!
Lotsa Love,
Sovie |
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| | | | AWWWWWWWWW!!! Wow that story was... WOW. lol i liked Paradise too, but i can't decide wich is better! I'm going to go buy your book tomorrow i swear! thank you for letting us have this wonderful site and for writing beautiful stories!
~Claidi Winter. |
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| | | | OMG!!! I LOVED IT!! hehehehe a wonderful story, couldn't stop reading it till i was at the last chapter poster.. i just loved the plot and everything! |
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| | | | | | Sabra - Thursday October 17, 2002 at 21:54 | |
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| | | | I love this story! It was awesome! |
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| | | | | | Anonymous - Sunday September 29, 2002 at 14:45 | |
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| | | | O how sweet* . . . . . but . . . . is there more ? he he he I hope so !
**Good Luck and Keep Up The Great Work** |
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| | | | Ohh ohh!! Wonderful story!! I love it!! Almost....but not quite finished......I wanna see the wedding!! PLEASE!! Until then.......ja ne!
MasacoMamoru ^.~ |
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| | | | I luv this story!!! It is so good. But it says it isn't complete.... Do you have to add a epilogue or something? |
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| | | | | | LadyA - Thursday July 04, 2002 at 18:10 | |
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| | | | I can't believe I've spent all morning reading your wonderful stories! I am such a DID (Damsel in Distress) fanatic! Especially when the DID in question has such a wonderful hero to save her!
Thanks for all the hard work! |
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| | | | I totally love this story...I especially love the part when Darien was on his knees....awww it was soo cute.... |
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| | | | | | Anonymous - Sunday June 30, 2002 at 00:25 | |
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| | | | | | Anonymous - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 22:56 | |
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| | | | great story, as usual! im hoping thats not it tho... so if its not, keep writing! |
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| | | | | | Anonymous - Thursday May 30, 2002 at 15:40 | |
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| | | | Hurry up and finish the story, you're already so close to the ending!!!! |
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| | | | | | Anonymous - Friday May 17, 2002 at 22:16 | |
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| | | | I'm wondering, How are you going to finish it? with the wedding maybe, or maybe at some other special occation! |
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| | | | Awww, I am such a sucker for sweet and sappy endings, Aria don't you EVER stop writing! |
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| | | | *grabs story* I love this one too!It took a minute to get into it but it`s good.:) Dragon Ball Z is almost on! |
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| | | | | | Innocents - Wednesday April 10, 2002 at 20:57 | |
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| | | | Oo!!! Finally, I get to comment of Paradise!!! Yea! *Does a little happy dance* I've been waiting! *Giggles* Anyway, it was ultra sweet! I swear on my little black blook that it nearly gave me a cavaity!!! *Sighs* I thought that it was very romantic... Hehe, and as all of you should know, I love romance... *Looks around room at unsuprised faces* Yeah, like you don't! *Giggles again* Well, anyway, this was a very nicely written fiction Aria! I was glad to read it... *Whispers* Do you relize that I read this like, three weeks ago and I still remember it? Like I've said before... You rule! *Looks at everyone and says proudly as she can* Aria-chan and Ice-chan happen to be my fav. authors here... They totally know how to make a story work! *Sigh* To be like them! Hehe! Ja! |
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| | | | | | selenis - Friday April 05, 2002 at 02:43 | |
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